Z Day

Still rather incoherent. I have no idea who I am, or how I ended up in wherever the hell that compound was or why there's zombies or anything, really. It is much improved, but it needs some work. Your spelling and grammar isn't terrible but it's obvious that as you get excited, it slips a bit. Proofreading each page is what I'd advocate as a solution. Spend more time on Character Development because it was sorely lacking. I really didn't like the one page where it was either fake a heart attack or die. Terrible choice set there. Overall though, much better than before. Still wouldn't be half-decent if it wasn't your first game but pretty decent for a first attempt.

To improve this game, I think you should add more vivid description, perhaps increase the length, make the characters more interesting and worth reading about, as well as offer more choices.

Pointless Drivel

Uh... so what happens next after I go through the exit? This game is so short...

Good idea but the plot was poorly developed and I needed more.

Good job.

really? one ending, death

Invading the soviet union would really present a ton of logistical issues. This needs a good backstory. Nice try.

Short

Pretty short.