Zombie Crisis

Decent enough story, I like the rather blasé way the reader's character casually accepts the destruction of civilization and the likely deaths of all his friends and family. The tried and trusted formula is there, a touch more character depth in your next work would help it stand out a little more, enjoyable enough stuff though.

Lacks real plot and has all the cliches of the typical zombie game. The grammar is acceptable, and the story shows that you've got promise as a writer. But for now, formulating new and original ideas is where things can be improved.

Too short, not reasonable, and awful grammar and spelling. Proofreading isn't hard.

Eh. Decent. Better than some I've seen, at least.

It's good, but a little short. I suggest you watch some THE WALKING DEAD for ideas.
But impressive!

Story is too short, you can't really get much out of it. If expanded, could become something worth of your time to play.

Much like Survive the Zombies

Momma's recipe...

Will's right, you could've added background into the characters. I also like the way the player's reaction to the zombie news is like the way Shaun did. (in the movie)

Anyway, I still see potential for you to improve. Make your next stories longer, make more ways to draw readers, etc.

But until you improve, however, your stories will remain as boredom. 3/8

A bit short to be honest. On the other hand i like the writing style. Could be a bit more stuffed with infos/lore/surrounding.

jk dude this game was awesome! ignore my dark side :)