Zombie world

It was super short, but I got to say it was fun. Make a longer one soon! Don't hesitate to message me about a new one! Sign me UP!

Ended just as it started getting good.

I mean, the writing isn't that bad.

What's with all these tiny games we're suddenly getting? I guess a bunch of schoolkids found us. They haven't been terrible but it's a little annoying having a bunch of much more substantial storygames pushed off the front page for them. The writing in this one is more or less fine, but like all these stories there's just nothing here and it will likely be unpublished for low ratings.

I saw the title and length and knew it wasn’t going to be good. However, I was surprised that the writing was actually okay. But still, way, way, way too short. It ends in 2-3 choices no matter what path you take, and there isn’t much writing on each page either.

2/8.

I just knew I was in for a story that would test the limits of my morality, when the first choice was to "risk it for the biscuit".

The writing isn't bad, per se, but there really isn't much to this, is there? It ends rather quickly when it feels as if it just beginning. At least that is my opinion from what I've read.

I honestly can't wait it too high, but i would like to see this writer make something that is more substantial.

The writing isn't great or really that good, but it isn't awful so I gave this a 2. It lacks a plot or character development because of its brevity. Stories under 1000 words tend to be unpublished (and get rated a 1). The site really does prefer stories of at least around 2000 words to be long enough to hold a reader's attention