A Fowl Problem

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8/8.

+ Suspense.
+ Excellent pacing, balanced with reader's control/ ability explore the story.
+ Genuine plot twists.
+ Humor.
+ Creative writing style.

- Thought the game would have more items / puzzle aspect.
- Did not utilize inventory function.

Why did the ducks kill me? What did I do to them??

First off, loved the pun with the title, "fowl problem". That was a good indicator of the humor and wit that was to follow.

This was funny as hell! Who knew ducks were such big drake fans? I really enjoyed the writing in this story, it's such a silly and ridiculous concept, but you did a good job with it. I thought it was really funny how, in this super wholesome story, the main character suddenly gets the thought of "Can a duck blend?", a departure from the previously wholesome tone, but somehow still fitting in well with the humor of the story. I did not expect that path at all, but I'm so glad you had the duck simply disappear into smoke rather than write anything gruesome. The idea of ducks making you a cult leader is so fucking funny to me for some reason, nicely done!

Never before in my life have I thought "I need to be the leader of a cult of ducks" but here we are.

Quack!

Very funny. An angry duck always makes a story better.

I laughed a bit too hard on this. It's quite a ridiculous concept, but very funny. I just wish that you could put a duck in a blender.

Got the leave the bedroom ending