Player Comments on Bacon Wars

Well, it is something that this was finished in such a short time, but I’m not impressed with the uses of the English language on the first page with all the swears. Sure, I guess that’s the way you talk and all, but usually that’s just not needed in the written word. Perhaps you can find some other ways to present that information without all the additional swears. For example, swears can work as part of dialogue when you have a character who uses it all the time. That makes sense. But when it is part of the title and directed at the reader, that’s not nearly as effective.

Beyond that, well, at least there are choices in this story. There are indeed options that lead the reader off in different directions and the choices do appear to have a clear effect on the story. Beyond that, well, there’s just not all that much to this story. Most of the story seems to be focused on trying to kill police rather than actually trying to get some bacon. So sure, this was written in 76 minutes, but perhaps it would have been quite a bit better if some more time was spent on it.

Probably one of the best lolrandoms I have read on this site. I haven't even had bacon in my life.

This really wasn't terrible. The humour was a little too 2010 era lol so random for me, but not too terrible overall.

kewl

wtf this is so funny i love the aggresive humour

good

nice way to pass time without getting overly obssessed and wasting 12 hours!

It's very good. It's funny, I can tell the Author has a great sense of humor. Being very short, it kept me clicking through the whole thing. Sometimes I just click through a bad story game to tell the Author to proofread it, but this had very few mistakes.
However, I feel like the maturity level may be low? Just by one. It's not that big a deal, though.

Also, you think you could lend me some bacon? I want it now....

This made no sense whatsoever, but it was kind of entertaining for being a "joke" game. It did make me crave bacon though....

Absolutely Awesome.

Oh shit son, I killed Morgan the Owl. And then I killed some other people and run away, and I don't even know what became of my goddamn bacon.

Lol. Never knew bacon can be so magical.

holy shit.phsycortic answer

"# @coins"
And that's the true ending...

Stupid owl xD

That gave me a little to much humor for a days

Laughed my ass off to this. Thank you.

I just killed everything I could kill. Hehhehheh.

This was way fun.

well.....I burned to death and wrecked a car lol

This. This. This was gold. This was pure gold. Bravo. 7/8

This game made my day. Brilliantly shocking and mischievously funny. 8/8 would r3pl@y m8.

this is my humor

That was much better then I thought it would be

That was actually better then I thought it would be.
5/8

This isn't great. You say you made it quick and it shows.

This story makes me love bacon more than I already do.

I thought this was hilarious... it made no sence and was completely random/creative. What really made it a kick was no matter the choice, the result was never something you'd expect. I enjoyed it c:. Even though i ended up in jail and being butt raped for the rest of my days. (apparently the burnt bacon made it hard to keep a firm grip on my sanity... and the soap xD)

And remember kids: knowing is growing.

Kudos for an understood reference.

Amazing!

lol

I'm impressed that you managed to make an entertaining read like this in 90 minutes. It's pretty abrupt and could do with some more detail in places, but it's got a coherent story and writing. Pretty funny, too. I liked the appearances of site members which were somewhat accurately portrayed.

5/8

I am enlightened... apparently I also taste of bacon?

Interesting. Cool incorporation of the other users. LOL

Nice, short and funny

This was pretty funny, I never thought that one day I would be called a perv for making Briar cry, killing Killer, Killing a demon Jew and a transgender Owl. It has truly enlightened me.

Why was I not in a game about Bacon? I am disappoint

An interesting story. Nice writing style, but I would enjoy something a little bit less random. 4/8

*sniff* This was amazing. Thank you. :')

Well I liked it.

Well, I see no one has said it yet, soooo...

Bacon is love. Bacon is life.

I killed Aman and Morgan. I feel like such a horrible human being. Capybara. Such a horrible Capybara being.

Kinda like Madglee's "A Day In Hell" only with bacon. Lots of it.

... It's so beautiful! ^_^

Oh my god. This game was brilliant. Playa, you are a god among men.