Player Rating2.36/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 140 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.


Please have mercy on me!This is a short story .This is also my first story.I Hope you like it and don't feel like you cant give me any criticism because i am open to any improvements.Thank you for choosing my game!

Player Comments

Husband or boy friend it kept switching
-- bburger on 11/27/2014 8:25:24 PM with a score of 0
I don't like this for a few reasons. For starters, the grammar was very bad. I mean...very bad...
Also, the reality changes depending on what choice you pick which is pretty annoying. And why did you use parentheses to tell us that dudes phone number? What was the point?
-- Madbrad200 on 9/4/2014 3:07:52 AM with a score of 0
So you find out you are being cheated on, and that's the entire plot
-- Terrablade on 8/25/2014 8:31:39 AM with a score of 0
This was pretty boring but also interesting although the story was only like 3 or 4 clicks away of finishing. But please, as I submitted my email I will want a reply not depending on it or required but I will rely and look forward to your email. No spamming please but I did enjoy reading! Thank you for your time and please have a wonderful day!
-- Kim on 8/23/2014 7:08:27 PM with a score of 0
Boring as heck
-- HelloThere on 8/22/2014 10:08:27 PM with a score of 0
i have to play it again.
-- ME on 8/2/2014 2:58:30 PM with a score of 0
That as short
-- jelly on 7/21/2014 6:22:28 PM with a score of 0
-- Lightningheart on 7/19/2014 5:36:08 AM with a score of 0
sorry but that was not fun sooooooooo boring!
-- anonomys on 6/19/2014 9:05:20 PM with a score of 0
Make sure to place a period at the end of the last word of the sentence, like this. See how I didn't do it, like this ?Well, that's one thing to keep in mind. It wasn't too bad for your first story game, but not a whole lot of work seemed to go into the project. Maybe spend more time and effort on your next project.
-- WoodenWriter on 5/22/2014 9:50:00 PM with a score of 0
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