DELTA: The Beginning
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played times (finished )
"march in the swamp"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.
Part of Series
DELTA Operative Colbin McCallahan is dropped into his first mission in Kolvia. You must stop the terrorist threat before they take over the world. Don't be fooled by the short storyline! There are multiple storylines that branch out just by making a simple mistake.
on 12/18/2016 10:41:38 PM with a score of 0
Colbin's Fate (Rouge Ending)
-- Tester on 8/31/2016 1:21:46 AM with a score of 0
Is this some kind of demo you are trying to hide?
on 3/31/2016 12:09:49 PM with a score of 0
on 2/27/2016 7:35:23 PM with a score of 0
Ugh. If your story is only 2/8 in length, WHY DO YOU MAKE A PART 2?
on 2/17/2016 3:07:14 PM with a score of 0
Ending rather fast
-- gunboat baker on 7/19/2015 1:04:06 PM with a score of 0
Wait, is this a storygame or a joke? Because either way it's not good. Please don't be insulted by this; I mean, it WOULD be good if you actually, you know, actually put some time and effort into it?
on 6/11/2015 12:01:45 PM with a score of 0
The dialogue was horrendous. Either stick with quotations or stick with script-like dialogue, don't try to mix the two. Also, There's really no need to serialize a story like this. There are several games on this site, whole games, as in the entire story is contained in one game, that are literally thousands of pages.
on 8/12/2014 1:35:59 PM with a score of 0
not very choose your own...
on 6/27/2014 4:43:55 PM with a score of 0
It was okay but I don't really like story games where it shows what people say by typing their names and then a colon. That's how script's are written and this is a story, not a script. Also in the one where you knock the guy out of the plane, how exactly are you supposed to clear your name?... You did it. :p
on 11/17/2012 5:16:29 AM with a score of 0
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