Ghostly Mystery

Very nice story; well written with nice pictures. Also tells a good story about atropos and so forth. I would have rated this higher and probably included it in my list, but for some problems. A few times topics come up that the reader knows nothing about, so feels weird asking. Also, there's not enough background on who you are and why you're visiting this lady. Furthermore, you can only meet one ghost.

better than school worse than cafeteria food, decent, short, and above all else, them ghosts was smokin hot

good job, just from context clues and 1 end i could figure out all of the ghosts.

Very short. You have a good premise that seems like the start to a much bigger story but then ends quickly, would have liked to have seen more details and backstory of the characters.

Ok, kind of boring.

Omg! The young woman was weaving the thread of life and the old white lady cuts it!

it was okay 4/8

Uhh, well this started off really interesting, but I never got to help the woman or solve the mystery. Is the best ending you can get chickening out and going home?

...Is there a point? I mean, there's really no way to get an ending where you "win." A game isn't much of a game if you can't win.

can you win? it was a good story though