mystery / thriller
, #24 for
Played 2,343 times (finished 141)
"Trek through the forest"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"Must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.
Discover the many ghosts of a Maryland heritage lodge. History blended with the present, reality with fantasy.
Having been asked to help Mrs McPhail and her family to identify the cause and identity of her supernatural encounters, you find youself wrapped up in the ghostly encounters. Hopefully you can find the cause and meaning of these events.
Very nice story; well written with nice pictures. Also tells a good story about atropos and so forth. I would have rated this higher and probably included it in my list, but for some problems. A few times topics come up that the reader knows nothing about, so feels weird asking. Also, there's not enough background on who you are and why you're visiting this lady. Furthermore, you can only meet one ghost.
on 9/22/2006 8:14:58 PM with a score of 0
good job, just from context clues and 1 end i could figure out all of the ghosts.
on 6/15/2021 10:20:37 AM with a score of 0
Very short. You have a good premise that seems like the start to a much bigger story but then ends quickly, would have liked to have seen more details and backstory of the characters.
on 11/30/2016 10:12:53 AM with a score of 0
Ok, kind of boring.
on 5/28/2015 2:35:08 AM with a score of 0
Omg! The young woman was weaving the thread of life and the old white lady cuts it!
— Juliet on 11/1/2014 4:07:29 PM with a score of 0
it was okay 4/8
on 10/22/2013 4:57:02 PM with a score of 0
Uhh, well this started off really interesting, but I never got to help the woman or solve the mystery. Is the best ending you can get chickening out and going home?
on 1/16/2013 9:36:03 AM with a score of 0
...Is there a point? I mean, there's really no way to get an ending where you "win." A game isn't much of a game if you can't win.
on 9/16/2012 9:43:29 AM with a score of 0
can you win? it was a good story though
on 5/15/2012 7:38:34 PM with a score of 0
it was alright
on 10/24/2011 9:52:05 PM with a score of 0
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