harry potter sorting quiz

I thought I bet rate this quickly and get the point because this story won't be here for long :) I think you need to work on the spelling, grammar, plot, setting and characters. To steal a Blackadder line, this story started bad, got worse in the middle and the least said about the end the better. Even by the fairly low standard of fanfic quizzes this one falls short and I think this review is already longer than the quiz so I'll stop it here :)

I get what you were going for sort of, but it didn't feel like Harry Potter at all, and definitely not enough to achieve what you were going for. Also, having no Slitheren, putting the wrong animal with Ravenclaw, making up your own value, and reversing the value for Hufflepuff made the game way over the top. Also, to expand on another comment, no one wants to go on when presented the tooth brush choices at least in my opinion. I would encourage you to look at the different Harry Potter story games on the sight, and the other story games in this johnra in general.

so funny

It's too short to even give it a review.

I didn't feel very represented by any of the teeth brushing options, so I had to stop there and rate it a 1.

sorted your mom

Yay, point for me

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