Ineptitude 2: ELECTRIC BOOGALOO
A
family friendly
storygame by
Cricket
Commended by TharaApples on 4/21/2021 5:26:54 PM
Player Rating
5.44/8
"#248
overall
, #23 for
2019
"
Based on
69 ratings
since 12/01/2019
Played 1,185 times (finished 99)
Story Difficulty
1/8
"No possible way to lose"
Play Length
2/8
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
Maturity Level
3/8
"Must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.
Tags
No tags
Write or be SHAMED!!! *Any resemblance to real life persons, living or dead, is entirely coincidential.
Player Comments
Beautiful
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Suranna
on 8/13/2023 11:26:04 PM with a score of 0
This was a good story and you will enjoy it too.
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Candleshoe
on 9/15/2022 4:56:30 PM with a score of 0
This story was very uncomfortable to read. Not because of the lolicon or the hentai, nor was it because of that random "go on a rampage and murder your roommate and possibly his girlfriend too" end.
No, it's uncomfortable because of how realistic the descriptions of procrastinating are.
8/8
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Celicni
on 6/8/2022 4:42:16 PM with a score of 0
Entertaining and arguably shorter than some of these reviews.
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AnthonyScoffler
on 10/12/2020 2:43:36 AM with a score of 0
Yay! I won as well!
On a different note, this should be required reading for every contestant before signing up, no matter their experience level. I am sad I didn't read it earlier so I could discard the advice like the pigheaded retard I am.
Great story.
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enterpride
on 8/10/2020 4:28:27 PM with a score of 0
This is book about chicken nuggets for all children
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— Turtle buttington on 7/10/2020 6:43:39 PM with a score of 0
A story in which fagots get what they deserve,laziness can be its own reward and the smallest of efforts can get you something in life. Too bad it's not much.
Setting: The setting does not have a lot of descriptive details. Cys greatness is never described in greater details. Thus making the mc joining the contest a bit lackluster. What exist is only visible in some routes. And even then it's minuscule. Not a great deal of effort was put into exploration of environment. Though considering the nature of the plot it is to be expected
Overall nothing remarkable. Just bland
Plot: Now this is where the game shines. It's humorous and in some routes not so predictable. It perfectly captures the spirit of Cys forum. I wish there were some funny user comments added to the plot. In routes where pc gets shamed or wins the contest.
Grammar: Now while i heavily enjoyed the writing it does come of as a bit informal and unpolished. When the mc is shouting the text uses capital letters instead of exclamation marks. Sometimes you have lines like "of fucking course" rather than the formal " of course" little things like that makes the product unpolished. However it does not deteriorate the humor.
For that i give it a 6/8
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Gandalfto123
on 7/3/2020 6:38:43 AM with a score of 0
Humorous, had me laughing the whole way through. Makes you wonder what choices the author made.
P.s. Pesky bird
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— Echo on 6/23/2020 9:01:26 PM with a score of 0
I'm a lot late to the party but i found this to be a very witty and comedic read. I smiled all the way through.
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Yuuko8hp
on 5/1/2020 12:43:39 PM with a score of 0
Yay! I won!
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ArtsyGirl38
on 2/8/2020 12:54:25 AM with a score of 0
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