Lakepointe High

This was pretty good! Bravo :)

Let me start off by saying that I found this to be a enjoyable highschool story. I think that this is a pretty well-written entry for the school-based side of things on this website, as there is definitely a good amount of choices that are in this storygame. There is something that isn't really made quite clear in this however, the gender of the protagonist. I wasn't quite sure if I was playing as a male or female lead in some paths, but I assume that the author intended for them to be gender neutral.

Anyway, all of the romance in this story felt a bit sudden, but despite the minimal errors in grammar, those story aspects were written well enough in a technical sense that it didn't feel insulting. I don't want to spoil too much in this comment, but I found the path with Chloe in particular to be written well. It just ended sooner than I would've liked, but I found myself pleasantly surprised with the writing in her path specifically, and I found the writing in that particular path to be some of the most emotional in this story. While there are some fun scenarios and well-written dialogue, most of the paths ended before I could really get invested in a particular branch that I was on.

These are fun little stories, but I think even short stories need time to be fleshed out to make them more fulfilling in the end.

There's definitely great writing on display here, and there's some promise to this story, but it does come off as a bit disjointed at times and that's unfortunately a setback for this storygame.

At the end of the day, the writing for the most part is concise and this was a very interesting game to read through, though there are some flaws they minimally detract from a otherwise enjoyable experience.

... This story is amazing, I kinda got teary eyed at one of the endings (more specifically both of the ones with Chloe).

/Well it was okay?

I personally found this quite enjoyable. However, I was a little sad as there was no happy ending for Marcus.

"Tish's eyes bulge and she smacks her little asian hands against the desk."

Oooookay then.

I'm not sure if the main character is male or female so I had no idea what I should choose. Way too confusing! Clear that up, please.

Yay I got to be with the cool crowd

Great

This is actually one of the better school-based stories sinply because there are so many options. There are enough options that I want to play it over again and see what I will get the next time.

4/8 not bad, I became a cult leader then forgot what I um.. what I was, well that doesn't matter does it?