Love Triangle

This was a rather fascinating love story.

While the premise is certainly interesting, I can't say that the presentation of this was the best. There were numerous amounts of typos that were present in this story, and pages that lacked much in terms of text. I couldn't really see a reason as to why I should pick one love interest over the other, because both didn't really seem to do much in terms of standing out to me.

The romance in this just didn't feel very genuine, and the girls had their moments of being somewhat horrifying. I mean, wanting to kill themselves or the reader at times, but I guess that was supposed to make a point that love makes most people insane, or drives them to do crazy things.

Anyway, my advice would be to better proofread your story for grammatical errors and slip ups. Also learn how to flesh out your characters more and make them feel more realistic, add some depth to them. I can't help but feel that those two things would have went a long way in making this a more enjoyable and fulfilling storygame.

I can't say that this is the best love story that I've played, but this was certainly quite a interesting game.

This just lacks polish in many crucial areas.

It needs more sexy feels

HORRIBLE

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this was trash/ why did they keep killing themselves like stop jumping out the fucking window and cutting yourself fucking insane mental bitches go and jump into a mental asylum instead . this made me so angry that i had to go have angry lesbian sex with my sister. the anger fueled us to scissor very roughly all night long.

im a girl and I was hoping for a guy

dont know how we slipped into this rabbit hole lol.. were searching for a love triangle chatroom, looking for a consensus, curious about opinions, point the way?

It was okay not what I was expecting

It's truly amazing, but not enough options are a short story.

Hey I liked your game you should consider developing this into something more or making more games like this :). I think if you worked on it this could become something cool.