Commended by mizal on 1/22/2023 10:37:05 PM
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
Played 374 times (finished 20)
"Walk in the park"
"It'll be a while, better grab a Snickers®"
"Aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
They betrayed you, left you broken and bleeding in the dirt. They should have finished the job.
A second chance at life. More men to kill, more gold to earn.
Be warned: this is a different type of storygame. Consider it an interactive novel. There are several ways to reach the ending, but I suggest reading without using the Back button.
i am happy when i am done.
on 2/2/2023 12:55:28 PM with a score of 0
Your writing is masterful as always, ninja. The storygame itself is dense with content and choices, and it kept me entertained until the very end. I couldn't help but be curious in all of the possible outcomes and decisions that are so neatly and wonderfully placed in this story.
I have to say that I enjoyed every minute of this story. I'm tempted to say that you have outdone yourself, but your writing is always consistent in just how good it is. Thanks for yet another wonderful read, I eagerly anticipate the next storygame that you may create. Be it some inspired sequel to this storygame, or something completely different altogether.
At this point I think that it is safe to say that it is only right for me to look toward to your next piece. The level of care and attention to detail that you place into each of your stories is always a treat to read and enjoy.
Thank you once again, for writing this wonderful and enthralling story.
on 2/1/2023 8:45:38 PM with a score of 0
This story is a journey of self-discovery, and leads the reader to new levels of inner peace, harmony, and a sense of wellbeing.
It changed my life.
Overall: Absolutely amazing! The tales/paths in this story are woven together in a beautiful tapestry.
on 1/27/2023 10:04:58 AM with a score of 0
Ninja outdid himself again. I was really surprised at the number of paths and endings here and I think others will be too.
It is ultimately just a good story I'm sure anyone will enjoy clicking through.
on 1/23/2023 4:44:22 PM with a score of 0
I have a feeling that Ninjapitka really likes three things; boats, guns and islands.
on 1/22/2023 4:07:05 PM with a score of 0
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