Player Comments on Ocean Adventure

This had a weak start (typo on the very first page) but after you start using the items it becomes rather immersive, somehow. Short and simple and quite fun to play through.

At first, I thought the spear gun was a red herring - until I'd realised that you're scripted it so that the player has to check the entire reef. That's pretty neat, it ensures that they see everything the game has to offer, but also makes it a little linear. Also, I'm pretty sure a giant squid wouldn't be fended off with a mere flashlight.

You also failed to make me feel guilty for keeping all the treasure for myself. I fought a dangerous shark , defeated a squid with a flashlight and so I deserve this treasure lying at the bottom of the ocean. None of these friends did a thing to help out.

Overall, a short and basic game with some nice scripting which could benefit from some more content.

4/8
Seemed like a good idea, but poorly executed in my opinion. There items could have images on them. Horrible job keeping the reader hooked.

I like the story and how well it was made =)

This relic of a storygame is a great way to see the improvement of the site in the 20 years it's been up, because it's complete dogshit, but it was featured at some point.

As far as short stories with absolutely no effort go... This one was pretty enjoyable.

I do have to wonder, why the hell would the diver just be swimming around without his gear? You'd think he'd of grabbed that stuff before he jumped out of the boat.

Scripting was decent. Would've been nice if there were actual images for the items instead of just the generic loot bag, but for something that took me five minutes to complete, it was a decent waste of time.

Cute short story!

It was a fun, nice little ride. Would have wished it to be longer, and not have only one ending.

I couldn't beat it at first bot then I got it

It's a little too short, a bit frustrating since there's really only one solution, and that one solution is pretty much just repeating your last action in one of the screens. It doesn't have much characterization or clever humor to make up for the frustration or brevity. Still, at least it makes sense and isn't awful.

Spoiler!!!!! I didn't like hurting the shark. I wish there was an alternative where I wouldn't get hurt if I didn't hurt it first.

It was pretty ok... I guess. There were a few spelling errors, and it was really linear and short.

Very short and simple.

Not bad, but not great either. A good little time waster.

That was fairly short and very single-track.

Even more importantly, I cannot kill everything in this storygame.

hmm, I'm more interested in this "Taliban Pete" guy...

Some background images, like of sharks, squids, treasure chests, and so forth, would improve this. So would fleshing out the scenes.

I did like the game but it felt more like a demo.

I made it!

wow i beat it. pretty good i like it
6/8

better than I thought it would be

Nice job, just too short

That took me a long time but was a lot of fun. This could use some clean-up, and item images.

good, but a little too easy

ok, but, weird. talaban pete? what happens after that? FINISH IT!

I thought it was pretty decent game and I liked that you used the advanced editor. I think you should have some more options though- maybe there could be pirate ship to explore or something like that. I never knew Pete was a part of the Taliban..who would have guessed it?

This game is AWESOME. 8/8. The only think I didn't like is that there were no pictures and it took a long time to find it.

Hahaha taliban works :)

That was hard. I think you have to scare off the squid 3 times?

could have used a bit more effort and descisions, but 4/8.

That was pretty good actually, it was really hard, and it took me awile, but still pretty good.Honestly, make a sequel. It was awesome."Taliben" lol.

That was pretty fun actually.

Nice- required some thought.

good game! i finally figure it out!

Kind of interesting, pretty decent writing. Expand a bit and I'd really like this story.

nice little puzzle game there. wish it was longer.

It has a nice use of items before varibles were around.

it was fantastic,i hope there will be no 2 and ill be the first

This game was kinda bad, but kinda good.

Yay, I finnaly beat it. Complex and amazingly good game 8/10

You need to make your game longer and have more choices of what to do. I sugest that you also add pictures of what is happening around you in the game.I also think you should make it longer

Woohoo! I won!

Good game! Make it longer, though.<br>Also, change the boat's name.

wow! that was really fun.

A great little puzzle! Make Another game!

Excellent adventure, however there are a few spelling errors...

hey i liked the game but where did the picture of the giant squid come from?

This game is hard actually but it is beatable!! LOL i really do enjoy it actually

Fun Game!