patrol

A modern storygame by storm1993

Player Rating1.35/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 12 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty3/8

"Trek through the forest"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"

Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably be between PG-13 and R.

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There are a lot of choices so that does speak to a bit of effort, but the writing itself is just....not good and the author doesn't understand a lot of basic things about people just to start with.

— Mizal on 12/3/2019 8:33:40 PM with a score of 0

Grammar errors, pages without links, abrupt endings. This story is bad and should be unpublished.

— C6H8O6 on 12/3/2019 11:30:06 AM with a score of 0

Just... just bad. This storygame makes me feel like I'm patrolling for sentence-level errors. No wonder our prison system is so overburdened. 2/8

— TheChef on 12/2/2019 9:22:51 PM with a score of 0

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patrol

Player Rating1.35/8

Story Difficulty3/8

Play Length2/8

Maturity Level6/8

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