Player Comments on The Vampire Hunter

This was a cute little game; I definitely liked it. The storyline itself is quite short (any individual playthrough lasts only a few minutes), but there’s definitely a vast array of choices to enjoy. I found many of the paths rather humorous. The vampire hunter is quirky, in his adamant determination that you are undead - an assertion which may or may not be true. I think it’s cool how whether or not you are a vampire (and the corresponding state of the antagonist’s mental stability) is influenced by your choices in the game.

Some of the endings where you get to mess around with the antagonist’s mind are really funny. I took great delight in changing my mind about whether or not I was a vampire several times mid-play, blatantly admitting to being a vampire without a care in the world (you only live once, truly), and pretending to act human when I was truly wasn’t. My favourite ending was probably the one were secretly an incredibly powerful demon.

This story reminded me quite a bit of the longer twine game called “16 Ways to Kill a Vampire at Mcdonalds.” If you enjoyed this short, quirky story, you’ll probably enjoy that game, too.

Overall, I’ve rated this a 5/8. I would give this a higher rating if it were longer. Good job overall.

Wow, this game is quite humorous in all honesty :D The writing and humor are both done well and compliment each other, and the scenarios can change dramatically with whatever choice the reader may decide. Certain things like that give this story quite a unique charm, and a decent amount of replay value.

This story is definitely very fun, I recommend this for all to play.

Freaking hilarious. I am in love with this story, I seriously laughed until I cried. My favorite ending is the "Oh, I'm something MUCH worse" one. Brilliant twist. Most of them that don't end in the death of the reader's character are good twists, and even the "magic dust" was a good surprise.

This may have been short and a story without a whole lot of detail, but you managed to make it SO entertaining with so few words. I didn't have to wade through a novel's worth of sentences to get a lot of enjoyment out of it, and I think that's a rare trick to pull off. Bravo. I'm gonna go check out your other stuff, if they're half as good? I'll love them, too.

There was a typo in to path were you pretend to sleep, then attack.

"He suck blood away with all your might"

This is such a lovable story, it is short and sweet.

Newbie vampire hunters, amiright?

It would be neat to see a sequel to this storygame where the Vampire Hunter has more experience under his belt. Overall, not quite the battle of wits I was anticipating, but it was still fun.

it's a good story yay :D

I love vampires

Did you know some guys made a video about this one. That’s how found this. It’s on YouTube by Jack and jay. Good story btw https://youtu.be/u6w8qcf06_w

Really fun read! So much fun that we picked it for one of our YouTube videos! Thanks alot!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u6w8qcf06_w

Is there any way I can’t die?

“Thaaank youuuu....”

That surprised me and creeped me out haha

Fun ending.

Love the way you can be both human or a vampire

The ending was fucking hilarious

It was pretty good, although it was short. I read almost every ending. I am not sure if you die after the vampire reveals that he was under your bed, but seeing as it's a vampire I would assume so. LOL

Great work!

i am fond of the Cthulhu ending. nyarlathotep, yog sothoth ..
emmmmm

This is a really good story, reccomend it to all. I like how you can be 3 different things: a human, a vampire, or, my favorite, a devil with 27 horns.

not good

Best thing I read, 10/10 would do it again

love

cool ending

I'm pretty sure I got all of them my favorite was the demon one

Lol I'm dead. My sides burst when I saw the Princess Bride reference. "Inconceivable!" Ahahahahaha!
This was a short but fun game. Well played, sir, well played.

It is very short and a bit boring. If you like this stuff, sorry peeps!

I lived another day.

Lol beat him.

Nice story.

This was fun. It was quick, but entertaining. I liked how the player's identity changed based on what options I chose. It made me feel like I was in control and really "choosing my story."

Heh. I like the Princess bride relation. In any case, whether you take this philosophically or as a joke, you will be pleased. : 3

Extremely short, Die no matter what, bad. Sorry

Cool but not good enough

I created a Zombie Uprising in 2012.

Tried to turn him into a vampire; i am a boy.

I have assumed the hunter's place, now that he is dead, poisoned by his own game.

Died playing the logic game. Smart-ass hunter put poison in both of our wines.

I hunt vampire hunters.

I died... but the hunter is now in a asylum.

Lied about being a vampire. At least, i will go to Heaven.

I am one of Yog-Sothoth's comrades. The best ending for me.

Killed the hunter again. But this time, not as a vampire - as a werewolf!

The vampire hunter thought silver bullets killed vampires, not werewolves. But that doesn't matter now, because i'm dead.

Killed the vampire hunter in a alternative way. He is screwed now (not literally).

Kids, don't yell at vampire hunters. They can kill, ya know.

Turns out there was a vampire there. And now, the vampire hunter is away. Oh, jeez.

Wow! Killed the vampire hunter! Take that, hunter!

Was pretending to be asleep... then i took a hit to the chest!

Funny, but short. Make more like these!
It was very well written.

Bad endings and way to short

Short but really good

Only one complaint: Not long enough!

i love it!!! its fun for me

cute story lol Enjoyed reading thee different endings

Very funny, and I like how the descisions you make can effect what happened in the past aswell. Like for example: The hunter was an escaped mental patient, or you were a vampire all along. Nice story 5/8.

A bit short. But enjoyable. Good first story

So... I dissolve into glowing powder. My immortal life comes to an end? If I am immortal, how can I die? And id that mean I was a god or something? (My Name), God of Awesomeness!

Roflmao.

Ooo ending creeped me out

Hilarious. A nice short game with a lot of amusing endings.

Funny little tale

This was just perf.

It was a very amusing story. But could've been longer.

I loved it

Geez, so much death. Pretty humorous though.

This was a brilliant, short story-game. 6/8

Oh, I'm somthing MUCH wores. I like that ending. I prefur werewolfs over vamps tho.

nice little gem of a story game, very fun to read, liked the werewolf transformation the most :)

Dear Mr/Ms Author
I commend you for your efforts.I am highly please with this choose your own adventure . Thank you for your time and effort in the making of "The Vampire Hunter". I hope sincerely that you create more such entertaining works such as this . If so It would be my greatest honour to read such fine creatives pieces. And again I thank you for your time.
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Simply hilarious

Loved it.
6/8

It's hillarious. I love it. Enough said. :D

It was a nice short story, but there isn't much to it.

Amusing way to spent a few minuets trying to get all the combinations. Very well written.

well helllllloooooo randomness...... why don't they have an option that says "Well, im your boss in disguise"... just wondering...

I thought it was fantastic! More game than story, but I loved it.

Alright I suppose.

I got the survive ending, it was pretty funny. "Tttttthhhaaaannkkkmyyyyooooouuuuuu." Wasn't expecting that!

Everything I chose ended the game

Cleverly written. I enjoyed it so.

Amusing

Short but fun!

This is a nice game just for entertainment. Humorous and nice. It just shows what you can do with a game that all takes place in one room.

Laughed hard- now i have to look under my bed before going to sleep. LOL

Well, there was totally a vampire under my bed. Turns out I was screwed.

Funny ;)

LOL! HAHA!
that was really funny, i tried to get all of the possible endings and was suprised everytime. i love this type of story and am a big fan!
Great work mate!
BYE!

um ok what ending kills the vamp under your bed

This deserves an 8/8 just for the "Vampire hunter hunter" joke :P

this was a funny story. i liked all the different endings :P

Pretty funny! Definitely reminds me of the original choose your own adventure books that were always a little silly. (Prisoner of the ant people, anyone?) Only thing I could say is keep going with it, add more! But great so far.

needs a bit more and by a bit I mean a lot

There's a vampire under my bed!:(

That was very interesting.

It shows promise, but I wish it were longer... it seems like the beginning of a good vampire story.

Okay, some of the story seemed a bit underwhelming, but there were some really funny and/or unique endings to be enjoyed. One thing I wish would have happened was that the hunter actually finds the hidden vampire. ;)

pretty fun

i enjoyed it...for the five minutes i played it

(Second favorite ending? Vampire hunter... HUNTER. That was epic. xD)

magic dust ftw

Ahhhh.... Vampires!

Pretty good. I got the "Oh Im something far worse" ending.

So I'm a human/werewolf/vampire/demon? Whoah.

hehehe :)

Guuuuuuuuud

Tis was ok...

That is really cute. I like the ending I got, it was really amusing.

Cute game, and it's easy to get to all the endings.

many lols, I like how you mentioned the miscomsception(however you spell it)that Vampires' one weakness is a silver bullet. Bo approves

Awesome. I love how, depending on the ending you chose, you actually changed also rather than having yourself be human throughout all the endings, you give things their possibilities. Though I do rather like the ending where the vampire hunter becomes a vampire. It reminds me of Vampire Hunter D. I think, for what this story contained, it was of a good length and entertaining in its various endings.

a tad short, but very good.
The "oh, I'm something far worse.." ending,
now THAT was a plot twist!

I'm the Vampire hunter now. :D

The variety of endings is very nice, but the story itself is quite short, and the choices don't really seem to logically affect the plot progression. (There doesn't seem to be a way to predict how the hunter might react to your actions.)
Suggestion: For a game whose primary appeal lies in finding all the different endings, why not add a "Return to start" link to the end pages? That way it's a little easier for the player to try out several story paths before rating the game.
Favorite line "My one true weakness is bullets of any kind." So true.

scary dude scary I can't leave my e-mail for you but i can tell you that i might be a girl or a boy,guess.

i gave it a 5 simply for the intriguing endings. sometimes you were a vampire, sometimes you scared off the hunter with rthe vampire under your bed. very good endings, but the follow ups were not that deep or thought out.

Pretty good! I keep getting killed very quickly, but I'm gonna keep trying for a better one.

Haha, I guess there was a vampire in his bed. It was a short little funny game, but of course that's about it.

I'll give it no higher or lower than a five.

aaaand I hit an end link on the third page. And really, who wouldn't yell with a heavily armed man waking you up. I did what I'd do and I got owned bad. Perhaps you should rethink the early end game link, there's never a good time for it.

Holy shit a new story! Good writing, and just because this is the first new story in a while I'm gonna give it a 6. Too short

Just a short story until I get one of my bigger stories up. I'm working on ten different stories right now.