trapped in school 2: Master's Degree

Two problems really stand out to me with this storygame.

First of all, I would love more detail! Everyone, at the beginning, refers to him as the boy who saved the school. I would like to know more about this incident. I want to know more about Alex, Sarah, Mike, Larry, and Carter. I want to know more about the college!

Secondly, it is very linear. Please let people choose their path! No one likes a story where every choice except for one leads to death. Escpecially on the ones where the choice is random, such as with the fight scenes.

So if Larry is a homicidal maniac with a sword, how is he still in school? Why couldn't someone report him to the police? Why is he so moody? Why did it only take three days to get a masters degree? If the character is allergic to peanuts, why could you choose to eat peanuts a second time and theirs no mention of being allergic to peanuts? Why is it that when you get hit with a simple ball you die? How is it that you can get hit with a ball, cough up blood, and die form internal bleeding trying to tough it out, but the nurse can make it all better? School nurses don't have the ability to save you from internal bleeding. This isn't what a college campus is like, there is no principle, there are deans for the departments.

Just bad all around. Bad spelling, plot, linear game, and just didn't make a lot of sense. It was unrealistic in that when Larry tried to kill me nobody reacted! Shouldn't I at least had the option to tell somebody? Also, the characters were kind of one-dimensional and boring. I liked the decent amount of options but it always was either choose the right option or die, which just isn't fun.

2/8

Meh, not bad. But most of the choices forced you to chopse a certain one.

One of the worst games I have ever seen. It has too many grammatical and spelling errors to count. And nobody, absolutely nobody will pull you into a frickin closet and kiss you for no reason, or be able to throw a ball that it breaks your ribs and not that little asshole's. I hated this.

my fave character is alex of course

So.....getting assaulted by SOMEONE ELSE means that you'll get kicked out of school and won't get your degree, and if you tell someone in college a knock knock joke, they'll murder you?
That world is fucked up lol

This made no sense.

I played again just so I could die just so I could give this game the rating it deserves. I feel bad for this guy, maybe it doesn't deserve 8/8 per se, but all the other commenters are just giving him crap. It was pretty fun and well made overall, even with the grammar being mediocre. My favorite character was Carter, and I honestly didn't pay attention enough to the days to know which one was my favorite, sorry. Have a nice day! (:

This dude's got bad spelling. . .

Could've been way better if you someone else proofread it.