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Commended by mizal on 9/15/2022 3:12:41 PM
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
Played 268 times (finished 16)
"Trek through the forest"
"Not going to lose any sleep"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.
It's got sex. It's got booze.
It's got heartache, hurt, and happy times.
This is True Life, not a love story for the kids.
You'll find the storygame takes place in a familiar city. That's Sterling, baby, and don't you fuckin forget it; she may be a hot mess, but she's
hot mess. Fortunately for you sick fucks, there's enough to go around. Enjoy. Just be sure to wash up afterward.
Are you trying to get a featured story-game in every category? Because that just isn’t fair. You've already taken my spot on grim-dark fantasy, and this story-game has too much descriptive writing and branching, and many ways for you to read a unique ending, that I cannot rate it lower than what I feel it is worth, which is like a really good rating.
Why? Because Ninja has made a game that's a bit different than the ones I've read from him that have dark fantasy elements and magical things happening. No, True Life is a story that's realistic and grounded enough for what I think many that read it can see happening to someone on this earth. Be it someone they know personally, or even just some passing acquaintance.
This is a story where the individuals are very flawed and human, but that kind of thing makes for some of the best mature kind of stories. I think history has done more than show us that a statement like that isn’t one that has not a trace of validity to it.
Wow, this comment has become kind of a tangent. So I'm just going to settle my thoughts with saying to anyone that may find their eyes roaming on the page that has this story-game, and if you're able to get a glance of my comment and perhaps read a sentence of it or two..
Read this. It's another work from one of the most talented writers on this website. It will be well worth your time.
on 9/17/2022 2:58:49 PM with a score of 0
Loved it :) This story was short and sweet. Good imagery as per usual. I n e e d more. When’s part 2 coming out?
on 9/23/2022 10:10:54 PM with a score of 0
I will say that this is a pretty linear game, but the story you hear from the murderer is so involving that I can't mark it down for that, 8/8.
on 9/20/2022 7:42:01 AM with a score of 0
I thought that the main story was an overall good one, I can diffidently see how this is a seven out of eight in the maturity level, my favorite character in this was Julie. I didn't to a part where she has a backstory but what I did read was a very interesting and down to earth person who I liked listening to. the overall way that the story was introduced was very seamless and how it just started with the action was very interesting. the language in this story was very literate and I enjoyed when the characters talked to each other because is was so enthralling. if you are the type of reader who likes to listen to poetic interesting writing then this is the one for you.
on 9/17/2022 5:03:05 PM with a score of 0
I only needed to read three words of the description, and I wad sold.
on 9/15/2022 12:35:52 AM with a score of 0
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