, #25 for
played 602 times (finished 57)
"walk in the park"
"It'll be a while, better grab a Snickers®"
"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.
There exists a world between worlds, where all of the magical creatures have been imprisoned. No one knows much about this realm, for most that enter never return. Those who do escape tell tales of a maddening maze created to keep the creatures confused and trapped. In this world anything can happen, and you can end up anywhere with the turn of your head. Will you be able to escape the insane world of Vanvid?
What an interesting story! Although I've only completed one storyline, the one with Mary the wolf, I look forward to finding all the endings. You guys did a fine job on it!
Now, a little constructive criticism if you may... I suggest going back and checking for spelling errors. There were few as I played, but I believe it will help your story greatly!
Also, I'd suggest breaks in the paragraphs. One large block o' text is a bit tedious to get through, and as a person who often accidentally skips lines, or re-reads lines, it would be a nice relief to have these.
All in all, the story was cool! I'd love to see more like it! :)
on 7/27/2013 12:49:39 PM with a score of 0
Good and short.
on 4/6/2016 3:27:29 PM with a score of 0
A pretty fun, neat little game. There's nothing major, as far as I see, to critique here. I wish I learned some more about Vanvid though.
on 6/20/2015 5:00:57 PM with a score of 0
OKAAAAYY... that was good and I give it a 6/8.
on 3/29/2015 4:52:09 PM with a score of 0
That was a VERY good adventure. It was kinda long though. That might be because I played through all the possible outcomes though.
on 2/14/2015 9:56:34 PM with a score of 0
Loved it! I loved that you could choose to help people and to lie, and everything! This is one of my favorite games! I rated it 8/8! If you look at my rating system on my profile, you will see that this game is perfect! There's sort of a mystery in it, and I love that!
on 5/14/2014 10:04:34 PM with a score of 0
on 3/15/2014 2:02:35 PM with a score of 0
I reckon it was pretty kool and different XD
Keep up the good work =)
on 1/8/2014 3:43:21 AM with a score of 0
Is there a single actually good ending.
on 8/3/2013 7:02:31 AM with a score of 0
This was a nice, mysterious story--6/8--but the place was never explained properly.
on 8/3/2013 6:57:22 AM with a score of 0
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