Vanvid
A
fantasy
storygame by
mistman96
Player Rating
4.47/8
"#408
overall
, #21 for
2013
"
Based on
69 ratings
since 09/08/2013
Played 1,017 times (finished 74)
Story Difficulty
2/8
"Walk in the park"
Play Length
6/8
"It'll be a while, better grab a Snickers®"
Maturity Level
4/8
"Need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.
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There exists a world between worlds, where all of the magical creatures have been imprisoned. No one knows much about this realm, for most that enter never return. Those who do escape tell tales of a maddening maze created to keep the creatures confused and trapped. In this world anything can happen, and you can end up anywhere with the turn of your head. Will you be able to escape the insane world of Vanvid?
Player Comments
What an interesting story! Although I've only completed one storyline, the one with Mary the wolf, I look forward to finding all the endings. You guys did a fine job on it!
Now, a little constructive criticism if you may... I suggest going back and checking for spelling errors. There were few as I played, but I believe it will help your story greatly!
Also, I'd suggest breaks in the paragraphs. One large block o' text is a bit tedious to get through, and as a person who often accidentally skips lines, or re-reads lines, it would be a nice relief to have these.
All in all, the story was cool! I'd love to see more like it! :)
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Pisces
on 7/27/2013 12:49:39 PM with a score of 0
I rather enjoyed playing this game! It was well worth the time to explore the different endings.
This story does a good job of branching and including different storylines based upon choices that you make. In some of these, however, I thought they ended too fast and wish there was more narrative after the choice. There was a great variety of endings based upon choices, and it was fun to see where each path would lead.
The story itself seems decently written. There were a couple places where paragraph breaks and structuring would have made it a better read. However, this did not distract from the story for me.
The main disappointment that was that I never found out exactly why I was placed in the VANVID in the first place. At the start, this seemed like something I was on a quest for (along with escaping), but I never found the answer. I wish the narrative answered this in the storylines.
Overall, this is a good game with a solid story. As far as CYA it has defined branches of story based upon character choices and has a variety of endings. I enjoyed my time with this story.
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DBNB
on 5/16/2022 11:44:35 AM with a score of 0
Good and short.
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Jimmysutton
on 4/6/2016 3:27:29 PM with a score of 0
A pretty fun, neat little game. There's nothing major, as far as I see, to critique here. I wish I learned some more about Vanvid though.
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FazzTheMan
on 6/20/2015 5:00:57 PM with a score of 0
OKAAAAYY... that was good and I give it a 6/8.
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Flamepelt43
on 3/29/2015 4:52:09 PM with a score of 0
That was a VERY good adventure. It was kinda long though. That might be because I played through all the possible outcomes though.
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warriorcats64
on 2/14/2015 9:56:34 PM with a score of 0
Loved it! I loved that you could choose to help people and to lie, and everything! This is one of my favorite games! I rated it 8/8! If you look at my rating system on my profile, you will see that this game is perfect! There's sort of a mystery in it, and I love that!
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Meadow
on 5/14/2014 10:04:34 PM with a score of 0
Awesome!
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EarthCollision
on 3/15/2014 2:02:35 PM with a score of 0
I reckon it was pretty kool and different XD
Keep up the good work =)
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WintersDaughter
on 1/8/2014 3:43:21 AM with a score of 0
Is there a single actually good ending.
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ck23838
on 8/3/2013 7:02:31 AM with a score of 0
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