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"wandering through the desert"
"Make sure not to blink"
"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
You are Moonbrother. A young wolf, try to excel and maybe be the Alpha male in the end.
This was decent, if only a bit linear.
It felt like there was really only one correct sequence of doing things, but it was both fun and simple for the most part. It seems like the game aspects take priority over story elements, and I do think that a good balance of both always makes for entertaining reads. But I don't find this bad, because I found myself enjoying completing this game.
I only wish that there was more depth to the system in general. As of now this feels quite linear and lacking in much detail and story elements, but this does get the gaming elements right for the most part. Because the player must build themselves up before they're able to achieve and earn everything, the journey was short, but it was fun enough.
I must say that I look forward to seeing what you can accomplish with a deeper system in place.
on 3/21/2017 9:09:50 PM with a score of 5500
I think the simplicity worked for this kind of story where you are focused on objectives and survival, as motivation for getting the 'win' option. However, I didn't understand the purpose of the human village when it inevitably leads to death. This story was enjoyable, and worth the five-ten minutes it takes for you to complete it.
on 8/25/2014 7:01:08 AM with a score of 5500
Nice concept. Though this is short, the fact you can't repeat actions if you try something too early makes you want to play again. It's maybe best thought of as a puzzle rather than an interactive story. A little more narrative and more choices would go a long way, but I enjoyed what was there.
on 2/27/2013 3:17:46 AM with a score of 5500
It was good
-- Rilee on 4/21/2020 6:31:34 PM with a score of 4500
Interesting! I just wish there was a girl's version. I love wolves!
-- Teya on 12/2/2019 12:24:11 AM with a score of 5500
OMG I <3 it. It was so hard though but then I realized what I was doing wrong lol. 10/10 :D
-- Distraction on 9/1/2019 10:50:24 AM with a score of 5500
on 8/4/2019 1:24:28 AM with a score of 4500
in all ways you die terrible i want a chance
-- Destra on 6/28/2019 12:56:42 AM with a score of 0
Pretty good. You don't need much to win, and it is the most linear it can be. There is only one way to win! SPOILERS BELOW! WARNING!
Other wolf pack
See, there's really not much to it! It could be much better, also, if you added some more context.
on 5/9/2019 7:20:13 PM with a score of 5500
Ummm... How do you win???
-- Jay fur on 8/9/2018 8:34:39 PM with a score of -500
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