Domitus, The Reader

Member Since

11/28/2018

Last Activity

12/12/2018 8:38 AM

EXP Points

81

Post Count

13

Storygame Count

0

Duel Stats

0 wins / 0 losses

Order

Sage

Commendations

18

Last Update: 12/5/2018

Memorial of Past Lives

Danaos

Sicarius

Darksol

May they rest in peace...

 

 

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Recent Posts

50 words story thread. on 12/11/2018 12:31:19 PM
Sounds like a dark joke.

50 words story thread. on 12/11/2018 8:17:46 AM
This was really funny. I like it.

50 words story thread. on 12/11/2018 7:54:41 AM
Is a 19 year old an adolescent?

50 words story thread. on 12/11/2018 5:32:17 AM
I concur. It's easily my favorite so far. I think the determination came from a desire to stop the countdown and save themselves. That's how I interpreted it seeing as they're guilty for fighting amongst themselves when there was a bigger threat that they could have been dealing with.

50 words story thread. on 12/11/2018 4:53:34 AM
What symbolism? I just realized that this could be interpreted in a few ways that I wasn't going for. I was trying to keep the same rhyme going throughout the poem, but I couldn't immediately think of something that would completely fit in the first stanza that would also maintain the meaning, so I see where you're coming from.

50 words story thread. on 12/10/2018 11:15:20 PM
The world was like a children's book, The memory is a haze. I'm with my dear so long ago, A girl who's name was May. We played until the sun had set, I said I'd like to stay. A flash of light took me away, We're broken by the day.

OFFICIAL official CYS Discord on 12/10/2018 12:23:05 PM
And every time, I was the victim.

First Storygame on 12/6/2018 4:11:51 AM
You're not doing something big but you're going for an 8 on length? Seems a little contradictory, no? Anyway, what's your storygame about?

What To Do For My First Storygame? on 11/30/2018 2:29:13 PM

You should always do what you're most interested in because it makes seeing it through much easier. I've always been partial to fantasy and war stories, so I think they all have some potential. The toy soldiers sound interesting, and it would be nice to see how it develops.


Reviews Needed on 11/29/2018 3:03:49 AM

I'm glad I deleted the stories in time then.

Also, I just realized that I've now been a member of every Order at one point.