Ok guys, I'm currently writing a school piece and I would really really appreciate it if someone could have a look at it unpublished and gimme feedback. Don't please put comments in the game - you can post it as a reply here.
If u wanna have a look http://chooseyourstory.com/story/1st-term-at-thorn-academy
Ok thanks
Moved to Writer's Workshop.
Unfortunately there is currently an error in trying to look at unpublished stories. Should be fixed on the next update.
You should be able to go into editing and preview it, and then link us to the first page as yeah, as End said that doesn't work.
Didn't you post an OP like this before? :/ Hmm... I do recall reading that storygame and PMing you about it... I guess I'll do it again when it works. :)
Hmm...I remember reading this before xD
Presumably there have been major changes.
Presumably.
Hopefully, though I haven't seen them on much, and i lurk on here a lot.
