Ducky Park

Player Rating5.47/8

"#146 overall, #17 for 2007"
based on 170 ratings since 03/27/2008
played 2,828 times (finished 182)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a Snickers®"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

This story contains adult language and adult situations coupled with a cruel and twisted sense of humor. That's right, you are reading a story written by donteatpoop.

You go by many names; Ricky, Retard, Ricky Retarded, Ricky THE Retard, Stupid Asshole, Dumb Fuck, Moron, etc, etc.

You are 20 years old and your father has decided it is time that you get a job. Unable to find employment elsewhere, your father has forced you to turn to another option; working for your uncle at an amusement park he manages. Should be an easy job, right? There's only one problem, you're a fucking idiot.

Player Comments

One of the two stories DEP copied over from Infinite Story and while Reunion got featured, I feel that Ducky Park is a better story overall and underrated.

The plot is simple. It tells the tale of a hapless retard getting a job in an amusement park. Hilarity ensues.

Well hilarity ensued for me at least. You’re either going to like the humor in the story or you won’t. Since the story’s main draw is humor, its success is dependent on it and since humor varies from person to person, that might be why it has a middle of the road rating overall.

It isn’t a long story, but it does have a good amount amount of branching all of which lead to amusing ways the protagonist can fail spectacularly. The writing of course is good as is to be expected from DEP.

I know DEP said he was supposed to expand the story at some point. Some of the added stuff would have included a few extra choices like some more mascot costumes to wear, a Halloween focused branch and a branch dealing with the little kid section of the park. Who knows, maybe one day we’ll see these additions.

Anyway, I liked it a lot.
-- EndMaster on 6/23/2018 2:23:35 AM
Pretty decent in my opinion.

Definitely a very humorous game, and I laughed multiple times while reading the very funny and creative writing. Although, at some points the sense of humor seemed to get old. Perhaps it went a bit over the top, and just seemed like really lolrandom humor.

The writing is definitely pretty good, and the characters seemed well developed (at least most of them anyways.) But the sense of humor just seemed repetitive to me, and overall that made for a downfall in the writing quality.

While the humor didn't appeal to me as much as was probably intended the choices are meaningful to the storygame, and there's a fair amount of branching here, so well done on that note.

You did do a very good job of fleshing out a plot and setting, and the characters were mostly well developed, as i've said. The details provided about the characters and their personalities definitely gave them a realistic feeling and relatable characteristics, which is always nice to see in a storygame.

4/8, lots of room for improvement but this was pretty good.
-- MinnieKing on 6/29/2017 6:35:20 PM
This storygame was pretty funny, all things considered. The writing had some typos but they weren't abundant and I found myself enjoying the humor that's in this game.

Ducky Park doesn't seem like a place that I'd personally work at but it's entertaining from the perspective of a outsider looking in xD

Much laughs were had while reading this, so bravo :)
-- TharaApples on 11/11/2016 1:24:44 PM
No win....WTF
-- ..... on 8/23/2018 6:47:33 PM
That was hilarious, but your name is crude. Btw I wish it was longer because it was pretty good. 7/8
-- Frontierloc on 11/11/2017 3:27:20 PM
Well, I would like a bit more choice, even if the choices were a bit wacky and random. I'd enjoy that, but suddenly I get the impulse to touch a girl while working a lemonade stand??? It seems more chance than anything.
-- Chickdove on 5/15/2017 11:49:20 PM
It was pretty fun working there as Double D.

Lol, it really was.
-- At_Your_Throat on 6/12/2016 9:11:57 PM
Funny x3
No good endings for the poor guy
-- Seto on 6/11/2016 12:16:30 AM
It's been a while since I read this. Is it even possible for it to get funnier? Yes!
-- TheNewIAP on 4/28/2016 8:52:10 PM
I actually enjoyed this story.... sorry for low ratings.
-- RimC on 4/28/2016 9:59:33 AM
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