Forgotten Magician

Player Rating2.03/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 14 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty6/8

"wandering through the desert"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

A serious, humorous, and abit dark story that the player's choice could result the player acquire item depend on the route that player choose.

Having woke up in mysterious ruin without any memory " I " try to explore the ruin and find the in this ruin have something that are long forgotten in the history of mankind. After got out " I " will go and see the world and try to regain the memory that have something to do with the forgotten ruin.

Player Comments

As others have mentioned, the grammar on this one is a definite problem. The story itself was not too bad, a little cliche at times, but overall a fun CYOA. It had a few interesting paths, especially for the better endings.
-- Ama_ColorYOA on 10/11/2019 9:03:35 AM with a score of 0
Um well, the path leading to the perfect ending was mildly interesting I guess, but the grammar in the story could be improved. By which I mean it was almost incomprehensible. Make sure you use good word processing software that will alert you to faulty grammar. Better luck next time!
-- Luciel707 on 10/6/2019 5:41:40 PM with a score of 0
This looks like it was written in a foreign language and translated into English using an online translator. The result is words that are strung together in an incomprehensible manner. After a few pages of this, I clicked around desperately looking for the end game link.
-- Bill_Ingersoll on 10/4/2019 8:43:58 PM with a score of 0
I am not 100% sure what I just did, but I "Direct the log to the rock the erect upward bet that I would fly to safety." Since I was naked at the time, I think it was something pretty perverted.

I also sweat from out of my eyes, and was keenly aware of how far away things were to the centimeter.

I'm so confused.
-- Gower on 9/30/2019 6:02:35 AM with a score of 0
Hey! Good try, but you might want to go over... ahem... everything again with some sort of spell check or similar device that will allow you to say what you’d like to say better. You got the title correct though, so 2/8 for you.
-- TheChef on 9/29/2019 11:22:33 PM with a score of 0
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