Kaiju Domination: Episode 1- Godzilla

Reminds me of Pokémon. xD I was actually very excited because I love the feeling of challenging opponents using minions, but it was a bit disappointing. I honestly think that this has potential.

However, let's start with the most distracting thing: Grammar and spelling. It was bad. Really bad. You seemed to be using texting language like "u" and "haft". Along with that, you missed capitalizing and punctuating sometimes. Additionally, you did not use dialogue properly. It was just detracting from the game.

The story was linear, and the leveling up (which, by the way, was weird. Five levels at once???) and training were pretty much pointless. The money, as well, was almost pointless except as a reward system. However, that reward system had little value, as I could not access the store again. For a game like this, I'd expect one would take advantage of the variable and scripting systems because they'd definitely enhance the story. You could include random rolls and damage ranges instead of attack sequence links.

The descriptions were bad or nonexistent. I don't know what their monsters look like! So what, there's pictures? The point of pictures is to enhance the story, not replace description. The protagonist is basically just floating in the middle of nowhere being challenged/challenging others. The lack of description was sad. :'(

Your characters were flat. 2D. I couldn't connect with any of them - honestly, I view them as objects and not people because of their lack of depth. The story itself served no purpose and was too short. The setting did not exist (well, it did... barely), and I'm curious on HOW you got Godzilla in the first place.

Despite the cons, this storygame has potential. I could see this storygame becoming a decent RPG with a better fighting system, expansion on story, expansion on characters, and of course, a very intense proofread. :)

I like this a lot!

I won !!!! YAY!!!!!

quality!!

fucking end game links might have made this more than a 1 but no you gotta be like this

Why exactly do you have the store with all those expensive items when I was literally only able to access it once?

Also, why have the description of the different attacks if you can't even choose which attack you can use?

Finally, the obvious strategy was... obvious. Power up > all.

It was fun. I felt like it was familiar... almost like I've played a game like this on Nintendo device?

Eh, maybe I'm remembering wrong. There were quite a few spelling errors like congratulations was spelled with a D and some words had letters that weren't supposed to be there.

4/10...wait a minute, your rating is evolving! It's a 5/10!!!!!! WOW!

nitty

It was satisfiing to see everyone die but if you could continue it would be better.

This was pretty cool, I really like godzilla and pokemon (I know that's what this is based off of)