Rebel Jedi 2: The Rebel Base

Player Rating3.85/8

"#330 overall, #33 for 2006"
based on 146 ratings since 06/21/2006
played 1,615 times (finished 167)

Story Difficulty6/8

"wandering through the desert"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

You are a jedi. You and the Rebels are escaping to The Rebel Base on Tatooine. On your way you will encounter several dangers of the galaxy.180px-JediExile.jpg  This is the next chapter in the Rebel Jedi series.

 

Player Comments

The "End Game and Leave Comment" situation is something I really dislike seeing, especially when it comes to having absolutely no hint that you might die if you choose that choice. It was just: "Here, choose one of these randomly, because I'm going to give you basically no information about what's happening!" These make bad stories.

The writing itself is decent but can be better. More description would make it better and the story as well. A background is always useful, and could easily just be put in as an optional link that can be used by the reader if needed.

Looking at your profile, I can see that you won't be back to fix anything, so this can just be for others that have stories and/or are writing one. Pay attention to what you're doing and plan ahead. Having an outline is good and keeps you on path, and can easily be modified to accommodate some unforeseen issue. The writing was free of errors, but it wasn't that long anyway.

4/8
-- Nyctophilia on 8/30/2017 6:31:32 PM
It's a great standalone, but it's not very related to Rebel Jedi. If you classify something as a sequel it should build on the original.
-- HarryPotterDH7 on 11/9/2017 12:23:48 AM
6.7/10

A bit short
-- MetaMason on 1/5/2017 11:35:48 AM
Better but too short.
-- crusader on 6/20/2016 3:50:07 PM
Potential
-- Revan163 on 2/21/2015 12:59:05 PM
Much better than the first.
-- Nathan on 8/24/2014 12:05:12 PM
At some points I felt as though this story just gave you random deaths for seemingly normal answers.

For example, when your fellow gunner dies, I picked to stay in my dome instead of helping him. However, I died because "a stray blaster fire engulfes your dome in flames". At some points this was pretty frustrating, because the deaths had no correlation to the action that I picked!

But for the most part, this story was pretty good. A definite improvement from the first one. The writing could've been more detailed, and the deaths/choices/logic could have been more thought-out, but that's all of my complaints. Good story.

6/8.
-- Fazz on 7/23/2014 5:03:54 AM
This was better than the first one.
-- Jedi 77 on 5/21/2014 2:24:55 PM
Better than the first but still not very good.
-- EarthCollision on 3/20/2014 3:16:36 PM
It's okay. Lots of grammar errors though.
-- alabged on 12/21/2013 6:31:52 AM
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