Sparkling Forks

Player Rating2.69/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 66 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level2/8

"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.

This game is meant to be funny!! I have made a modified version of Twilight by Stephanie Meyer, so please enjoy the ride :)

Player Comments

This was so bad. But I've seen worse. I can't believe someone wrote a fanfiction portraying Edward as even more abusive than he usually is. In that, you have done the books proud.
-- Saika on 5/24/2017 12:00:41 PM with a score of 0
Um... what exactly happens here? Many people prefer if you say what you're going to do in the link, rather than put the page number there. It's very confusing for the reader.

Does the story really have purpose? I don't think so. Perhaps it could be developed at some point, but it ends to quickly, and there's simply not enough STUFF here. Develop characters, plot, background, etc. Don't assume people know Twilight. Describe, explain, show!

Also... if this is a modified version of Twilight... shouldn't it go to the Fanfiction section?

Otherwise, great job on what you have.
-- Crescentstar on 12/3/2016 10:41:14 PM with a score of 0
Cool
-- BoopyDoopy on 5/24/2016 10:55:49 AM with a score of 0
After two minutes of reading I was randomly told I had died so I don't have much incentive to try again and see if I can survive for 3 or 4 minutes :) Writing was ok though but there's no need to say "to do such and such turn to page x" as that's for books, on this site you can just provide the options :)
-- Will11 on 12/12/2014 2:54:04 AM with a score of 0
Rubbish. Instant death from the first page is a no-no, but the most irritating thing is the links saying "turn to page 5". The links should just say "go to Florida" or "Stay in Arizona", this is online and not a book. Use the medium correctly.
-- Jordi P on 10/23/2014 12:11:07 PM with a score of 0
Hmmm... Maybe I shouldn't go with dad to a place that the title obviously foreshdowed, of course that won't be an instant death...
-- ISentinelPenguinI on 10/18/2013 1:17:29 PM with a score of 0
Instant-death links are a no-no. Writing's fine, but like the Twilight series, it lacks imagery and body language, and focuses too much on monologue.
-- Swiftstryker on 10/4/2013 11:06:18 PM with a score of 0
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