You and Lee

Player Rating3.60/8

"#401 overall, #57 for 2013"
based on 122 ratings since 05/14/2013
played 1,174 times (finished 141)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Tags

Humor

In this game, you meet David Lee for the first time in years, and it is up to you to wrestle him out of a sickness by discovering the secrets of a certain Vanguard high school.

Player Comments

I think this was a little bit too random for my taste.


* There were a lot of things left unexplained;
(Who the heck is David Lee? What the heck is Drano? Who the heck is Olivia? What the heck is even happening?)
It's just really confusing.
(Unless you were going for a funny random type story. But you should've clarified this in the description since I thought I was going to have a serious story.)

* The choices didn't matter AT ALL. Except for the last 2 'choice' pages, your story will still be the same. (There was even one link where it sends you back to the page before it and you have no choice but to choose the other option)

* What was up with the endings? I mean, choose the smaller package you get 'leep stick' (or was it 'leep gloss'?); Choose the bigger package and you get a thong with Daniel Lee's face on it. (I'm guessing the character has some kind of crush on Daniel Lee?) And supposedly, the package you didn't choose will go to 'the fallen student' and seeing as that student was the 6'5 guy (Well,I'm presuming it was that guy; You didn't really say it was him exactly) I don't see how any of the items will benefit him (aside from the fact that he is well, dead (Well, I'm not entirely sure since you just said 'fallen')) unless he has a thing for 'leep gloss' and Daniel Lee...?

Your grammar was decent though, I'll give you that. But maybe you should have added some kind of back story, like, How did you meet David Lee? Why are people turning gray? Who was the 6'5 (or something like that) guy?
Not knowing what the heck is happening will be a big turn-off to a lot of readers.
-- Yuisawachelsa on 1/12/2017 1:27:34 AM
I got a thong.......yay?
-- Ravendash on 10/19/2017 10:39:52 AM
David Lee fetish is becoming a thing here...

But not to me. Who the farking quarks is Lee, and just how did I get to be so drooled up over this guy? And the monster, how did he start in the first place? So many random, unexplained things. But Drano ices the cake. What, who, whatever is Drano?

In short, too random indeed to be a good story. I do understand some stories do this random thing, but in a way which makes it pretty acceptable, but to this, not at all.

Grammar, though, is spit-and-polish clean and sparkly. At least you did not fail on that.

So, it's a bit more fun than my calculus-witchcraft quantum statistics essay on formulae homework. 4/8.
-- AgentX on 2/22/2017 8:04:17 AM
Amazing
-- bryce on 2/1/2017 3:34:51 PM
What?! One word: WEIRD!!! Not a bad story. Kinda funny.
-- Quorrah on 12/25/2016 1:40:46 PM
Ehhh, not very interesting and super confusing. Needs a little back story too.
-- GigaKnight on 12/2/2016 2:31:29 PM
This was quite a entertaining ride, I don't think further elaboration is even needed, umm but I quite liked this.
-- TharaApples on 7/31/2016 2:27:39 PM
I felt like the 'Drano' could've been better explained.
-- AllThatIsGold on 1/10/2016 6:00:42 PM
That....was....that.
-- Anime_Fan on 3/31/2015 7:41:22 PM
Hate this story so much
-- Caron on 3/29/2015 12:19:13 PM
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