DMDierdorf, The Reader
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I DJ for a living, all genre's of music. I work for 3 companies, including my own, I'm also the resident DJ at The Mule Nightclub in Penticton BC.
Always loved creative writing, especially "Choose Your Own Adventures"
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The story isn't meant to be packed full of pages overly descriptive writing. It's meant to move at a decent pace and give you just enough to let your creative imagination run wild. It will be a Zombie apocalypse setting, of course, focused on survival.
This is just a demo to get some feedback about what I've started :)
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Story in need of testing! on 2/14/2014 4:57:45 AMI may, eventually. Depending on the direction I decide to take the story. Maybe even to just take refuge :)
Story which will no longer be in need of testing! on 2/13/2014 5:52:25 PM
I've tried keeping the description a little on the light side. I prefer games that move at a decent pace. A long, overly descriptive story doesn't leave much to the imagination. I believe that "choose your own adventure" stories should leave a good air for a creative imagination.
As far as your "Historically accurate knowledge of European Martial Arts" goes, as you may have noticed the TV station in the coffee shop was covering the 2014 Sochi Olympics.
And seeing as Europe has much stricter gun laws, it's safe to assume that having a firearms license, and being able to carry a .44 caliber revolver around with you on the streets, puts the story somewhere in North America.
I highly doubt that in any combat situation, any characters in the story will be using "Historically accurate European Martial Arts".
However, if I find a use for a time machine, I will let you know.
Story in need of testing! on 2/13/2014 3:49:47 PM
Story in need of testing! on 2/13/2014 3:45:17 PM
Thanks all for the comments! I will be un-publishing the story and continuing the adventure (as well as fixing some of my foolish grammatical errors!)
If there is anyone interested in receiving an update when the game published, send me a PM. I'll be sure to write back when the game is up and running!
Story in need of testing! on 2/13/2014 2:06:31 AM
So far the attributes are used subtly in the background. There are a few pages with links that only work if you've chosen a particular job.
Thanks for the feedback. Ill be un-publishing the game tomorrow and continuing the story, including ZOMBIES! :)
Story in need of testing! on 2/13/2014 12:51:13 AM
http://chooseyourstory.com/story/zombie-survival-in-need-of-a-name~21
Its just a small (28 page) intro to a story I'm working on. Looking for a few testers and opinions!
Possible to have a link based on a variable? on 2/12/2014 5:17:30 PM
Perfect, that's exactly what I needed, Thanks boys!
Possible to have a link based on a variable? on 2/11/2014 9:30:12 PM
Say I want a link to appear only if a STRENGTH stat us above a certain value, how would this be done?