Transient

After days of stumbling about in the desert, you find a town with some severe food shortage issues. Something seems off though...

(My entry for the Lone Hero contest. Be warned it's rushed.)

Does anyone know how to get the rank A ending in The Knight Order of the Golden Sun? I tried playing it like a saint, I tried maximizing either the popularity or fame and even both but all of them get one of the other endings. Walkthroughs seem nonexistent. Did I make a mistake or do I have to be a spoiled brat at the start and slowly mature? Please send help if you know cause curiosity is murdering me.

I have a couple of questions.

1. Can I take down and edit a contest entry (I forgot to add the contest entry tag)? 

2. If I can is there a way to keep the reviews or are they kept automatically?

3. What are the differences between red and blue names?

4. Can I get some tips on how to make my sentences more interesting and varied?

Entry: http://chooseyourstory.com/story/transient

Technically it's not August 18th yet so you could enter now.

It’s not too late to enter right?

Thanks and the site's been great so far.

Thanks!

Nice to meet you too!

Wow, nice play with my username!

I've read most of EndMaster's and I'll definitely try Paradise Violated. Thanks for the recommendations.