Hey guys! I'm not sure what you will think of this.

So here it is:

This is a story I've been working on for about a year.
It has no links, except to end the story. the intro in the actual story can explain what you need to know. Just tell me if you have any suggestions, remember, this is an actual story, not a story-game. It is still in the making. As it is only about 30-35 pages long (on microsoft office word), it is far from done. Tell me what you think and keep your comments appropriate!

No swearing on my page, please!

Or other foul language!

Thank you!