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I am a new writer and would love as much feedback on my posts as possible! I might be annoying sometimes, but I am trying, so just accept it! Just kidding, if I annoy you, inform me.
I usually write poems and do calligraphy in my free time, so writing stories is new for me.
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Years ago, Earth was at large; beginning societies on different planets, (due to water and food shortages) and leaving Earth for long lengths of time. Only the strongest could leave Earth and live on other planets. Your grandfather was just barely under the capabilities to leave Earth. Now, 150 years later, Earth is chaos. People roam the cracked, fallen apart, supposed to be roads, trying to find food and water. You have to do the same. Except you have a group to help you survive.
The goal of this game is to survive with your group and gain as many followers as possible.
Each follower gained adds 5 points; each follower lost loses 5 points. You start with 25 points, and if you get to 0 points you lose.
You are a punk teen that is put in many tough decisions. Peer pressure of drugs, the awkwardness of your first time having sex, and even the bore of being grounded is all included. Have fun being a good kid... Or not...
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Identity (Song by Asher Childress) on 2/21/2019 4:34:28 PMFollow me on SoundCloud @Asher Childress!!
I got a confession, I say F suicide
Teach me a lesson, how to set my feels aside
My mind is real feeling weak
Trynna walking across the street
The pain from all my thoughts
Already rollin down my cheek
I’m in this car driving really far
Screaming with my hands on the handlebar
My mind and I decided to go to war
With no idea what I’m fighting for
I’m tryna find my identity
It’s always making my shake at my knees
When I rap about life I feel released
It’s always giving me a bit of relief
When I think hard I pay emotional fees
My mind gets all messed up
Unless you know the keys
My life is getting so bad I told my friends to leave
Told them all to flee and get away from me
I'm a bit worried about my sanity
I don’t know if it will run away
I don’t know if i can breath
I don’t know if depression is a F-ing disease
Forget all of the worst, my emotions burn
I don’t wanna get up, cuz my soul feels burnt
I smile when you give me a present
But in my head my feelings are unrecognizant
Do you you want a hint how to get to my mind
Don’t try to put my mind in a splint
That's not how I want to spend my life
You only have me an hour a week
I can barely even give you a peak
Of my negative emotions, my fury of explosions
Why in my mind, this life causes commotion
Here's another new hint
Here’s how your life should have been spent
This is an example from my own mind
These words can be fully understood
Only by those that are my same kind
Light depression on fire,
That’s my only desire
You say it’s how my brain is hard-wired
I refuse to accept it, you’re a F-ing liar
You’re telling depression that he’s already hired
Situation is not as dire as your making it required
Your so called help does not make me inspired
I point out all the faults in others
Hide the fact that I always suffer
In my life I need a buffer
Between me and my thoughts
If I were a quote I’d be “lost, not found”
All of my negative thoughts go around
In circles all the way underground
All of my thoughts are hurting
Always shaking at my knees
What does threading a post do? on 1/20/2019 2:56:11 PM
Alrighty, thank ya.
What does threading a post do? on 1/20/2019 2:01:48 PM
What does threading a post do?
Two Faced Yet Nobody Knows;poem by Asher Childress on 1/20/2019 2:00:23 PM
I think most people can relate to this and that is one reason I am sharing this. I am also sharing this so I don't seem like a dummy kid that tried to post a story and failed Hope you guys enjoy!
Two-Faced Yet Nobody Knows
I stay in my own little world
Nobody has been here but me
It is perfect in every way
But it’s lonely
It’s my thoughts
It’s positivity
It’s negative
It’s lovely
It’s hateful
I am not happy
As I should be
And yet I know
I am happy as will ever be
Be; a Poem By Asher Childress on 1/20/2019 1:53:27 PM
This poem is about my brother. I wrote it when he was spending too much time with his friends and girlfriend. We used to spend lots of time together daily, and when I wrote this he was almost always away from the house and wouldn't even respond to my texts.
Hope you enjoy!
Be
He was my best friend
He was there for all of my life
He seemed like he could do anything
He looked out for me
I don’t understand
Don’t understand why he would do this to me
I know he tries
Tries to stay with me
But he has left
Left to simply be
When I see him
I see him and me
Not giving a damn
About what people see
I know I should be happy
Happy about what they are going to be
But he has left
Left to simply
Be.
Need; a poem by Asher Childress on 1/20/2019 1:44:05 PM
Thank you!
Need; a poem by Asher Childress on 1/20/2019 1:43:32 PM
I like that you put your own preference into this. I kind of wanted to have a few personal recommendations about it since I might write poems some in the future for a hobby.
When you said ¨Having it alone on a separate line does create more emphasis, I'll give you that, but then why not do the same with the final couplet?¨ I didn't really understand what you meant there. could you elaborate?
Thank you for the comment, it'll surely help with my future writing.
Need; a poem by Asher Childress on 1/20/2019 1:37:40 PM
Thanks. I did give this poem to a girl that I loved with all my heart; though I didn't get friend zoned!
Need; a poem by Asher Childress on 1/18/2019 10:39:50 PM
Need
When I first saw you
I saw perfection
When I got to know you
I saw pain
When I started loving you
I saw strength
Now...
All that I see... is what means everything to me.
What I have always seen
Is the strength to go on
What I have always seen
is the courage to do anything
What I have always seen
Is the love toward everyone
What I see now
Is everything I need.
Ideas, anyone? on 1/17/2019 10:56:48 PM
I need some ideas for a short read I could do. I was planning on making it horror, but I could try to make it some other category.