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I am actively working on one of my stories, Food War, and am looking for playtesters/co-authors. Would anyone be willing to volunteer?

I can play test.

I could play test If you want me to.

I can playtest. Coauthorin's fine too.

I'm up to play test. Also, if you could post the link to your game, that would be great.

This is the link... I think?http://chooseyourstory.com/story/food-war~21

I'm still working on it, and there's currently very little there.

Dear Wizzy:  please don't put a death link on the first page.  Sincerely: everyone.  ^_^

Dear everyone, forgive me, I meant to take that out...

From: Wizzy

... Why are you looking for play testers? Your story only has three accessible pages, one's blank and another is a death paragraph which you meant to remove by your admission. xD The request for co-authors, I kind of understand, but there's nothing here to test yet.

I just wanted to know if anyone would be interested in trying it out...

You probably should have finished a considerable amount of the game before you created this thread. Instead, now people who are interested have to wait for your progress. You should have waited.

That isn't how it looks. "Would anyone be interested in doing this when its time?" and "I am looking for someone to do this" do not give off the same impressions. 

Oh, I feel like a dumbass...

Well, it's a new concept here, though I am getting flashbacks to Foodfight, Veggietales, and The California Raisins.

I'm pretty sure you mean to say "psychic" powers, not physic. There are some other things worth noting that could use correction, but I don't think this is a bad start. 

You make the assumption he meant "psychic". Perhaps it's a badass power where you use Physics to calculate, using velocity, speed, distance and weights, things like throwing stuff and firing catapults, against people using genetically modified monsters using "Biology Powers" and those using Chemical Warfare using "Chemistry" powers. That'd be kick-ass. 

It would! But sadly, judging by the context, Wizzy was trying to write psychic, meant telekinesis / psychokinesis plus telepathy, and wrote physic. 

Well then, someone just on that idea, then. We don't need another terrible, uninspired game. Give me Physics Wars! Come on people, I'm giving you gold! This could be the second storygame to achieve 8/8! Someone make it!