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Breakfast Bad or Breaking Eggs?

one year ago
So I'm thinking of writing a light-hearted, silly fanfic storygame about Flynn/Walter White Jr. starting a breakfast restaurant chain after the events of Breaking Bad. I'm still in the stage of brainstorming for ideas, but I can think of some ways the story could go.

The bit that I'm stuck on is the title of the storygame. Which would be better: Breakfast Bad or Breaking Eggs?

Breakfast Bad or Breaking Eggs?

one year ago

Neither. Change the setting of the story from a bed and breakfast to a partisserie and call it Baking Bad. 

Breakfast Bad or Breaking Eggs?

one year ago
Or this works too.

Breakfast Bad or Breaking Eggs?

one year ago
Breaking Eggs is kind of a generic phrase. Breakfast Bad makes the reference and joke more obvious even without other context imo.