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This is my description for a storygame I'm Working on. It takes place in the Kingdom of Malliria, a subterranean universe. You play the part of Zanthiche, a blind warrior. Your goal is to take down the evil Nakorius, the wizard behind the plague. You are equiped with a few weapons and a hide armor. You have been taught the art of close combat and you rely on your other 5 sences alone. It will be published in a few weeks, if I can get a coauthor. Tell me what you think and how I can improve the overall plot.

Yes. The art is called Spirit eye, a psychic ability. It is used constantly. Not a lot of Blind characters have been invented in the game genre, but I entend to be the first.

My advice would be twofold:

Primarily, you need to focus on spelling and grammar. The only thing that hampers a great imagination coupled with motivation is the mechanics of English. Make sure your fundamentals are sound.

Secondly, definitely start with the advanced editor since the user interface is better.