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I decided to give a preview of Save Your Dragon 2. You won't get far, but this is merely for feedback.

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/Save_Your_Dragon_2_0x3a__Godly_Heaven.aspx

I like it and would read more =)

A few pictures don't show for some reason (the first page and 'Alarm' page). I'd give it a 5 as it stands right now, but would rate it higher if it was longer/finished. I'll wait till you publish it to actually rate it though.

I'll have to fix the pics then. Wierd. They are seen on mine.

The picture problem should be solved now.

I can see them now, it's fixed :)

previewing is over for now. I hope those who looked at it liked it.