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one year ago

Hey, I'm new here, and I wanted to say, I'm excited to be here cause I finally decided to give this website a try! 

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one year ago

Welcome to your new home away from home!  The best thing to do is start reading, rating, and reviewing!  Explore the featured storygames in the menu to your left, and ask away if there are any questions at all.

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one year ago

Thanks! Are there any stories you recommend me starting on? 

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one year ago

If you look at the "featured" games in the boxes on the "Storygames" page, you can pick and choose by whatever genre most appeals to you, and you can be sure you'll get something interesting.

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one year ago

Thanks!

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one year ago
Welcome!

Looks like Gower already covered the basics, so just have fun and let us know if you have any questions.

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one year ago

Thanks! 

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one year ago

Hiya! Welcome to the... OH DEAR GOD! That avatar is terrifying. Kind of tempted to flip every other image horizontally and see what ungodly monsters their faces make combined. ^_^

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one year ago

Lol. I'd love that!

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one year ago

Here you go! Aren't they dreamy? <3

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one year ago

I can't unsee that now.  Why would you do that?

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one year ago

Because I'm EEEEEEEVIL. ^_^

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one year ago

... Kind of cool though that the second guy's hair is an exact mirror image of the first guy's. :p

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one year ago

The second guy is Sans after getting mad lol

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one year ago
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

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one year ago

P.S I love The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost!

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one year ago

AWHHH! Thank you! <3

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one year ago

No problem, you should do another version of it! Well, in my opinion...

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one year ago

I am working on the sequel, but so far I've only finished the first chapter ^_^

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one year ago

Could I like help, maybe?

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one year ago

Avery needs people to pose in gladiator costumes most of all for inspiration.

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one year ago

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one year ago

Yeah, that'd be awesome! If you want to give the first chapter a read and let me know if you spot any spelling mistakes or anything, that'd be great. Here's the link. ^_^

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one year ago
I just started reading it, but I found one error at the very beginning of chapter 1. When describing about how Zeru joined the adult gladiators, it asks, “How did you react what Zeru left?” I’m not sure if that was on purpose, but it seems like it should be asking, “How did you react when Zeru left?”

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one year ago

Oh, thanks! I'll go fix that. ^_^

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one year ago
I noticed some other things, such as two periods at the end of the sentence, but nothing noticeably annoying other than that one thing.

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one year ago

Will try and find that one too. ^_^

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one year ago
Alright. I finished chapter 1 and I really liked what you had written so far. Looking forward to more! :)

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one year ago

Thank you! I think recently I've been suffering with really bad Magnum Opus Syndrome, where I think that Innocence Lost was the best I could do, and the writing I'm doing for Brother's in Arms just isn't to the same standard... So I'm really glad to hear that you're enjoying it so far. ^_^

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one year ago

So sorry, my school ended, and my computer died, but I'll look at it, and give some recommendations!

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one year ago
Welcome to the site! I do hope you enjoy your time here.

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one year ago

Thanks!