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hey guys FR... I saw your account before I was here.

Did you intend to respond to Avo there? Are you using non threaded view?

How did you see my account before you were here?

I'm not entirely sure what he's talking about, but I think he's in
non threaded view and didn't mean to reply to you.

Oh ok.

im his friend he meant to send it to you

So yeah I'm really confused.

he will reply soon sorry

No, it's ok if he's busy everyone has lives offline.

he said he will try to reply in a hour or so he told me to say this "pls read my bio" idk why but yea

I did just a moment ago but maybe I missed something because I skimmed? One second...

EDIT: maybe he thought I was someone else? I'm not getting anything from his bio except that he likes death note, his youtube channel name, and his favorite death note characters.

he was bored so he checked who was online and clicked you

Oh, ok. Then why did he mention it and why did he want me to read his bio?

so he talking to you know he's kringe

idk he just edited his bio

     You didn't respond to the post where I asked that, are you in unthreaded view? If you're seeing all the posts lined up vertically without changing horizontally, scroll to the top of the thread and click the gray button in the top right.

you talking about me or him

     You. Sorry, I should've clarified. But still, even if I meant him if your view is unthreaded you should switch to threaded.

hey...

     What?

Kabuki you should edit your profile pic 

... why did you reply to me for that? And also he doesn't have one.

srry i hd to leave btw

 

oh... l willl tell him?

     Ok two things you should really know. First, if you scroll up and read what I was telling your friend, you'll see my suggestion for turning on threaded view. This is pretty important, as having it off can be very annoying to other users.

     Second, you're hitting reply over and over. In the top right of your post, you should see a button that says edit. If you click this, you can add whatever else you want to say onto that first post instead of replying more and giving all of us an annoying amount of notifications.

     However edits are rejected if someone replied to your post, and you can't edit if someone has replied to it in which case it's sensible to make a new reply.

okay and how do you know so much are you a admin?

so im editing this and it doesn’t give you a notifications right?

     No, I've just been here a couple months, I just have gotten the hang of things and am giving tips. No, it doesn't give me a notification when you edit it.

     I'm glad you're actually trying to not be a pain (no offense meant), so many new users just troll all the time and are quite annoying but you seem to be nice.

      There are 3 admins on right now, Mizal, Avery, and EndMaster. Don't make an admin angry, but that should be common sense.

srry to replying im still getting used to this but is this game coded in java and will you get banned if you annoy the admins 

oh i figured this out now so you edit and if you reply i cant edit it!

and you seem to always be on here are you making a storygame?

     It depends. By annoying the admins, you're usually being a pain and/or trolling so in that case yeah. Also, game? This is a site, not a game. And I'm not sure of the code, you can try asking the code monkeys (what we call the coders) but I don't know who they are or if they're available.

     It's fine that you're still getting used to this, it's a good sign you're trying! To get on the good side of the community (or as good as you can get, with some people) try reading and rating stories. Maybe you could even try writing a Death Note fanfic, or something else. Oh, and don't be annoying.

i see i will post one of my books here (wich is gonna be my not so best book) 

and how do you make them... um

     Your books? You mean a story? I guess that's a good start!

     There's a sort of menu on the left. If you click my stuff, it'll bring you into your area and out of the forums. Then, off of the menu, there should be a create new story game button.

     Sadly, I have my own things to work on. But if you need any more help, you can ask someone else, that's the point of the newbie central. Also, here there's many helpful articles. I suggest you start with this one and this one.

EDIT: Oh wait I missed your question earlier, sorry, yeah I'm working on a few stories. I'm not always on, but I make sure to check in at least daily and I'm pretty active. My activity will probably die in the summer and come back next school year though, all my devices are cut off for the summers.

Hey there, would you like to know how to change your pfp? some users ive seen keep that pfp and some like me decide to change it. if you would like to change it, let me know and i'll teach you!

...? Do you mean cringe? This is impossible to read english...

     Ok this is just to painful to watch now (no offense meant). I was just casually looking at your story, the title's a bit long in my opinion but not a problem, and then I look at what you wrote. I thought this must just be how you type when talking to people or something, perfectly normal, but no.

     Please, PLEASE, use proper english in your writing. More description (although this isn't part of the english problem), more periods, and oh my god USE CAPITALIZATION PLEASE.

     Have a good day :D

Christ this thread is stupid.

What?

i noticed that to but me i right the story down and then add capitalization and periods etc but uhh is it good...

     Again, do you not have threaded view on? Anyway your story is better, but it still needs more periods or something to break it up in the middle. Right now, you have run on sentences that make up the entire paragraph, rather than multiple sentences per paragraph.

I said CHRIST, THIS THREAD IS STUPID.

hth

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i will try to fix it 

good bye most likely i will see you tomorrow :3

Bye! (even though you're online right now... well not anymore)

     I know what you said, I have these cool things called eyes and the ability to read. Anyway, I was asking what's so wrong with it which I thought was clear but seems I need to clarify.

EDIT: Sorry, I don't mean to be rude, I'm just in a really foul mood right now.

2nd EDIT: wait why did you make this the new thread title? Are you mad right now or something? He's literally just a noob getting help that's completely normal.

hey...

What?

tysm for kinda fixing the title

No problem, but it's only a small part.

... i noticed

     Only mods can change the title of the rest of the thread, sorry. And don't go around thinking End or Sent are going to somehow do that for some reason. Or any other admin, really.

sry i hd to leave no i dn edut thred titl btw

     ... are you ok? Who are you and what have you done with Mizal? 

Trying to decode: Sorry I had to leave no I don't...? Thread title by the way.

     I am confused.

That was really mean to Mizal, Avo! She’s just a mod trying her best to spell. :( There there Mizal, in two days you’ll have an awful Harry Potter fanfic called “You’re A Lizard, Harry!” to cheer you up! (shameless self promotion)

These poor mods and all the violence they have to face. Everyone talks about mod violence, but where’s the abused mod helpline? We as a site have clearly not progressed enough to be equal. Smh.

That being said, can this death note kid spell anything right please? I can’t decipher a single word that he types and he seems to be under the odd impression that this is a game as we are yet again flooded with schoolchildren.

Lol. Saying there there to someone who's not a child doesn't seem condescending.

good morning :)

avo remeber you said you are working on a few stories what are they about?

"Avo, I remember you said you were working on a few stories. What are they about?"

?

Didn’t  you say somthing about your stories

Yeah, I was question marking Mizal's post. Do you STILL not have threaded mode?

On today's episode of Explain It All to Avo:

Hi Avo! What was happening there was me taking the noob's poorly spelled and punctuated, ungrammatical post, and rephrasing it in English, to highlight the fact that it was poorly spelled and punctuated, and ungrammatical, in a lightly humorous way.


(Everyone else, by the way, when a child posts a singular question mark without a question attached, they are expressing general unarticulated confusion in a way that implies they expect the OTHER person to use more words instead.)

Oh, sorry. :(

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What... does this have to do with anything?

ha ha it is just a im bored because of school face

Then try reading or writing! :)

I did btw shifter is actully intresting!

Thanks! It's my only published story. And what do you mean actually interesting? Did you think I was a bad writer?

no its just usually people on here have bad stories but yours is good

Okay so this kid is 9 at most, right?

Not saying Avo's game is bad, in fact, it's extremely well made for a twelve year old - and a fun read!- but saying most of the stories on the site are worse (Unless they're exclusively reading 1-4s) is an insane take that pretty much only a kid would do.

That, or he's a creepy old groomer. In which case someone needs to ban his ass. <3 But counting the grammatical errors, I think it's safe to say this is a kid.

why do you think he is a 9 year old

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lol! How to win friends in the community: most of you suck as writers, except for Avo :) Coming from someone who hasn't learnt to use punctuation yet that is some strong criticism :D

... im trying to have a friend lol i have none

bro he is probally 9

 

what do you mean safe to say

Why are you replying to yourself.

How many times does it have to be expressed to you guys to use threaded view.

ban me

As you wish.

[No doxxing, this is your ONE warning] --M

Well now we reach the point where I tell you to get off the forum and go rate and comment on some games. Since you seem to have lots of well thought out opinions on why everyone sucks I look forward to reading them.

who is [REDACTED] and what happenned to this chat

Why are you responding to me telling you to get off the forum and read some games with this?

I'm fucking serious, if you guys aren't old enough for basic communication with other humans we can and will remove you from the forum. You do not need an account to read the games. And if you don't have basic enough comprehension skills and grasp of English to use the forum, there's nothing you can write that will meet minimum standards for posting storygames. Maybe come back and try again in a couple of years, but right now this is getting really silly.

If you click on my profile and scroll down, you can see my story titles and their descriptions.

ty i will read them

No problem!

Everyone, it's that time again! Equip your NOOB CRASHOUT BINGO to win a grand prize of absolutely nothing!

Am I missing anything?

Blister freaked out over admin edits near the end of his tirade, so you can check that one off.

But that was so long ago, we're still including that?

I think that it happened after the bingo card was introduced, so I personally am. There should probably be a judge for this, lol

No that was before, but sure I'll dig through Blister's and Asuna's messups.

sorry if im interrupting, but Blister and who?

Asuna. Not the new person. I would link the thread, but it seems to have been deleted.

Wait no I found it.

Was just about to link it, lol. Glad you managed to find it

Oh that person. and there's another new person?

Hey, only one bingo card per noob!

Everyone would instantly fill every square if we could combine them.

Wait, really? I thought that it was one card for everyone.

where can i get one

https://chooseyourstory.com/forums/the-lounge/message/30815

oh thanks. So i tick off 2 spaces so far.

hi avo

At this point, just use the private message feature! You still aren't replying to the right people, and you're flooding the forums as well.

     Done. I sent him a PM asking him to stop posting on the forums so much and to PM me if he wanted, so hopefully that'll help.

Wrong one

Just two? I thought he fit stupid (no offense meant!), spelling error, and grammar error.

oh crap i forgot grammar error thanks

Question: what are the classic blunders? And also, if we get a bingo do we just say so here or bump the old thread because I'm not sure about necroing a thread. It's past 4 days, the point it's dead.

If you tag Endmaster three times, I'm sure he'll be willing to explain it.

Legend has it that he gives 100 free points if you do it within a week of making your account

No clue how to put an image of mine here, but I am one away from a bingo, lol

Same, crazy odds. Really lucky, too, if one of us gets that one missing space.

My god, what are they putting in the school lunches these days?
(I know the answer, it’s brain eating amoeba)

Nah, it's just a bunch of prions.