ummm,
lol.
i was just trying to say that demos are never good. if you want an opinion on how a game is going, add someoen as a coauthor. otherwise, dont write a story unless you are going to complete it. note i said, you are going to complete it, not "i plan on completing it" there is a difference.
nate
ps, this is not directed to one individual. its for everyone who comes to the site in expectation of writing a story.
nate
Who has SIX unpublished games? When do you plan to finish all of yours eh?