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Chapter 10

9 years ago

Well my motivational threads haven't seemed to be working very well, but probably because I only write in them when I've actually done something, and most of the time I haven't, so with this last chapter for part 1, what I'm going to try to do is write something every day, even if it's only a little bit, until the chapter is done.

So today I've written out the plan for the last chapter and also written a couple of pages. It's only 30 pages altogether, so hopefully it shouldn't take too long. ^_^

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Come on, you can do it! I love your stories! (Though I don't think we've actually met lol)

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9 years ago

Hi there. No, I don't think we have, but I do like jars. You can keep jam in them. ^_^

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You offend me! Jam is too poor for my blood. I only like cheese puffs, Masons, and pencils in me.

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What about sweets? You get jars of sweets ^_^

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Hmm......maybe. Just maybe.

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But we have met. ;)

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9 years ago

Written a little bi today. Not much but I've been at work all morning and drama all evening, so I haven't had much time to write. sad

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9 years ago

What, how many chapters are you planning on?

Aw, that sucks.

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Only ten chapters in the first part of the game, but it's split into a trilogy, so I guess 30 altogether ^_^

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Wait what? I thought you were re-writing it so that way you could put it all into one game?

If it's going to be in three different games, how are you going to deal with continuity?

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9 years ago

It is one game, but the game is split into 3 parts. cheeky

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... You're welcome to write a little gay or hetero, too, you know. Understandable, Bri. Just keep at it, drops in the bucket, you know. 

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I don't how you write or who you write with, so long as you're writing.

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As long as you're writing, that's good. You're going to hell a lot faster than me.

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Yey! ^_^

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9 years ago

Written a little bit, but once again, not much because I haven't had the time. On the plus side, I have 9 out of the planned 30 pages written, so I guess I'm almost a third of the way done.^_^

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Hey, who edited this?

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9 years ago

Was planning on getting quite a bit of work done this evening, but bugger it, I'm tired. I wrote one page. That counts as progress. I'm going to bed. cheeky

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9 years ago

Good job! Even sitting down to write something, anything, is winning the battle. You've earned a night of undisturbed sleep even if I half wish you were some immortal untiring writing god so that we could get this game sooner.

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Quick question; Are you British? Or at least have an accent?

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Written 3 pages and now I'm going out, so that's all you get for today. ^_^

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Easter Pages are the best.

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9 years ago

Couldn't write anything yesterday because I was out all day and didn't have my laptop with me, but I've quickly thrown a page together today. Nearly half-way through, (which isn't bad considering how long the rest of the game took me.) cheeky

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9 years ago

... Well this isn't working very well. Been away for a few days again, so I couldn't write anything... And I've got to go out again now, but I managed a page while I was here. cheeky

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Good luck! How many more pages are you planning to do before finishing?

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For this chapter, there's only 30.

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Done 4 more pages. I'll get there eventually. ^_^

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What's the game? I'm crossing fingers for Innocence Lost, but anything would be wonderful. Good luck, and keep plugging away at it.

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9 years ago

That's the one. Looking forward to it.

Briar, any plans to ever enter an IF comp again, with this one or another game?

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9 years ago

Hmm... Not really planning on it, but I might do. The problem is finding the free time.

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It's Innocence Lost. cheeky

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Well this whole writing at least a page every day thing isn't going so well as I planned...  On the up side, I managed 3 pages today, so yey! ^_^

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Huzzah!

Better than what I've been able to achieve lately... bleh, I'm so tired.

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Woo! 3 pages closer. :D

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... Damn it's been a long time since I've posted in here. Been really busy for a really long time. Managed a couple more pages today though, so only got 5 more to go.

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Yay!

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Excellent. ^^

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Managed 1 more page last night. Very slowly getting there. ^_^

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Finished 1 more page. Only 3 to go. ^_^

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YES.

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Cool, looking forward to it.

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Finish the goddamn story. Your people have killed millions of foxes and created a dessert called "spotted dick sponge". You owe this to me.

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Finished another page. So busy, but I'll get there soon, promise! ^_^

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Done another page. Only one more to go! Hurray! ^_^

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Briar can see the finish line with each line that she finishes,
She is so close to her goals, she can almost pole-vault over the goal post!
And if she doesn't have enough in the tank, maybe she can just siphon enough,
To fill up this last can...

I mean, huzzah!

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Her palms are sweaty, her lines are messy, but she won't give, now she is eatibg her mom's spheggetti, now she vomits over the keyboard and... she accidentaly presses backspace and her page is gone... :(notreally)

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JUST FINISH IT

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 Go!Go! GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Are... are you finished?  *eye twitches*

@Briar_Rose

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9 years ago
Why don't you replace all the words 'empire', 'home', 'Rome' with 'school' and 'academy' and submit it for the School Based Comp.?

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Because it would automatically be disqualified for being a pre-existing story and even if it wasn't, you don't screw with a masterpiece.

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(Get Kiel-scoped)