do a new story. dont go backwards, your story is completed. move forward to a new story. you can do it.
Honestly, I haven't read it. But like I said, it's never a bad idea to tighten up something you've already written. You can still make a sequel when you are finished tightening it up.
I'll have to read it in the next few days though, I'll give you a detailed feedback (whether you like it or not).
i wouldnt go as far as to say its never a bad idea to tighten up your story. granted, just writing it and walking away for good is not the best answer either. but i fell into that trap of 'tightening' up one of my stories once, and it basically ruined it. sometimes its best to leave a good story alone. its up to the writers preference i guess.
I remember being able to see all the pics when I played it before.
I wouldn't add combat unless you think you can do it well. Too much cys combat is just "kick him" or "punch him" with one choice leading to death.
I might try to add a storyline - some sort of overarching theme other than just "get out of the woods."
I am thinking of the right game, right? I think when I played, I mostly wandered around in the forest till I died.