Bezro, The Reader
Member Since
12/10/2023
Last Activity
4/25/2025 11:17 PM
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Post Count
329
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0
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38
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| Achivement Unlocked | Park Bench Bum | -80 Points |
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192 Ounces
unpublished
I hate spoilers, just read it.
(You big faggot ThatIndianGay, this gay vampire story is gonna outrank your story and I bet I tried a lot less at it than you did. I hate you, eat shit and die.)
Chillin' in the Park
unpublished
You are chillin' in the park.
(Unpublished for good, although I would like to say to TCat I thought I did correct the grammatical errors in the story, and would like to know where I didn't correct them. A sequel will be released shortly, and hopefully an improvement on this story.) Edit: nevermind, fuck that. Nothing like this will ever be attempted by me again. This story will not be deleted just so I know exactly what not to write.
Recent Posts
The price of magic on 4/22/2025 1:42:41 AMThis was a really cool story, I enjoyed reading it. It does seem like a excerpt from a book, I would like to see the story completed. But also, was this inspired by the Owl House cartoon on Disney by any chance?
Method acting gone wrong: a 5000 word short story on 4/14/2025 9:28:09 PM
I came back from hell to say this, kys faggot, your writing makes me want to commit harakiri because the second hand shame of writing something so horrible and defending it so vehemently makes me feel like the only way to protect my bloodline’s honor from writing like yours is disemboweling myself. Also, don’t ever disrespect fresh like that again, she probably has bigger balls than you and she’s a girl you virgin cuck fag loser.
I've been kidnapped and now I'm here?? on 3/12/2025 4:18:32 PM
Looks pretty acceptable, you may proceed. You might like Mizal and all of her stories.
Thunderdome: Valentine's Match on 3/10/2025 10:21:49 AM
Story B
Thunderdome: the gay one on 2/10/2025 7:13:35 PM
My vote is for B, A seemed to drag out a little too long to hold my attention. They were both good though.
Character Desc. on 1/3/2025 2:08:30 AM
Don't make me renew the order, just chill out. I know your mad and everything, but I would like to remind you that you're the crazy person who went out and did that. Also, spoofing? Seriously?
Character Desc. on 1/2/2025 6:21:15 PM
Well it would probably depend on their own personal tastes. Like diabetics would taste sweet, smokers would have a smoky tobacco flavor, health nuts would taste like water, alcoholics would taste spicy. Edibles taste just earthy so weed smokers would just taste like salad. But I'm not sure, I don't drink blood.
That would be a cool thing to add though, where the kidnapper makes him eat or do different things based on what she wants her next meal to taste like.
Character Desc. on 1/2/2025 6:14:04 PM
I would assume, I think I've seen references in the skooma den (skyrim) and other works. I'll make sure to include that in my story though.
Character Desc. on 1/2/2025 5:26:20 PM
To clarify, the main character is kidnapped by a vampire to become essentially a blood cow. Your goal is to escape, but you developed an intense attachment to her from a combination of Stockholm syndrome, the vampire's natural seduction (which is a thing in most vampires from fiction, such as skyrim), and addiction from the endorphins injected during the vampire bite. Every time you make a decision that goes against the vampire's wishes, you have to play a minigame to fight against your own head.
TL;DR, there's a perfectly not faggot reason for me to write about a vampire in such a fashion.
Character Desc. on 1/2/2025 12:52:19 PM
Thanks, I don't know why I didn't do that.
