On her birthday, Kaede is warned by a spirit that her husband, Akiko, will kill her. This story is told using past tense as Akiko narrates how he killed his wife or did not killed his wife.

this is based from a story I wrote as a child but I will improve it !

maybe I shall change the story to 'You Are Dead, My Love'

thank you !!

I have posted my votes, the stories are enjoyable and fun to read.

I have enjoyed reading all three stories, but my favourite is story c. It has lots of good descriptions and uses lots of words i do not know, if I am honest (sorry). it make me want to improve my english, so I can write like that ｼ 

One part I liked was the way Titou starts to lose his mind as the story went on. The conversation with his mother being a hallucination was an interesting detail, it surprised me ! and good job on the way the locations are described, like the french streets at the start, the sewers and the caverns where Titou became mad. It is a small detail about gothic literature where the setting gets lower physically as the story becomes darker, it is present here. I like that the ending shocked me !

Story a was the best at keeping with the riot theme. It made the theme the heart of the story, so it was very focused. some parts were confusing? (sorry again). I liked the speech where the leader told everyone why they were rioting, it made the riot have a purpose and this caused Jack to believe in their cause. the way his expectations did not meet reality was a good detail. it is sad how he died at the end but his naivety cause him to be careless, which could be the theme maybe?

lastly, story b. I found it the most confusing one (i’m sorryyy) but it had lots of fun conversation between the characters. I liked the sarcastic main character insulting the other characters. There was the american joke of writing notes and sticking it on peoples backs. Or maybe european. I struggled to keep up with what was happening and remember all the characters introduced in the story. 

So I vote for c.