Don't Forget

I... I don't get. I just don't get it. It seems like the ending was rushed. Is there going to be a sequel or something to explain what's going on? I just... I don't get it.

A few things surprised me in the story.

With all of the people contributing to this story, I was thinking it would be a scrambled mess of a story and I was right. It went from talking about rocks to soggy waffles, which was a little confusing. Though I did enjoy the story, it felt a little rushed in the en, like you couldn't think of a good way to end it, so you made some confusing ending that had nothing to do with the original story.

The one thing I didn't expect was spelling/grammar mistakes. There were quite a few, which I thought was weird, but they didn't hurt the story much.

Overall, the story was nice, but felt a little like it was stolen or something, but it was still worth every cent.

Nooooooooooooooo is that it?

This was very similar to another story I read on here. Otherwise it was interesting though linear. quite a few typos further in the story almost as if it was being rushed to finish. Still not sure what I just read, but that's not necessarily a bad thing here.

I cannot believe you crushed my... My... I can't describe this... In my ending... No... I wont spoil... Play it to find out how much you will be.

It was ok but there was some spelling mistakes

I like snowcones.

P.S needs more choices.

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it's like a s-snow clone but with magic

Seems a bit too similar to Snow...but it's okay.

Pumpkin head with a suit and tie? Hmm, sounds familiar.