Dr.Seven's Experiments

A sci-fi storygame by Thanatos_Erebus

Player Rating2.43/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 10 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty4/8

"March in the swamp"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level4/8

"Need to be accompanied by an adult"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

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The world is not what it used to be, scientists have ruined it. After we finally perfected gene splicing and mutating animals things went out of control. Most people were against it and they ended up being the first experimented on, each new species were crazier than the next, having each scientist trying to one-up the other. Then on June 21, 2035, a massive emp wave temporarily disable the world's power. This caused the new species to escape. After that everything changed.

Player Comments

So please explain to me how I'm picking items up if I'm bound in a straightjacket?

— Bill_Ingersoll on 10/17/2019 5:17:33 PM with a score of 0

I like the core idea of this game, as it's essentially a locked room puzzle (although you have more rooms to explore.) Add a mad scientist running experiments on you, and it's an even better plot.

Unfortunately, there are a lot of mixed tenses, grammar errors, typos, and other readability problems. The choices give the illusion of something to solve, but are really just guessing. Because of this, it isn't very pleasant to read or play.

If the readability was better and at least some choices were more puzzle-based than guess and explore based, this storygame would be a lot more interesting and fun.

— Camelon on 10/11/2019 3:20:12 AM with a score of 0

I forgot to mention, there were a TON of mixed tenses. Also, the title has a mistake. It should be Dr. Seven's experiments.

— venyanwarrior on 10/10/2019 4:30:04 PM with a score of 0

3/8

The story was pretty short, then again I can really say all that much because my stories were arguably worse. I did notice a ton of spelling and grammar mistakes, including failing to do basic capitalization. The maturity level is way too high, it should be a 4, in my opinion. Also, the difficulty is too high as well. it should be something more like a 5.

Also, I'm pretty sure that this is not a horror game, so please remove that tag.

— venyanwarrior on 10/10/2019 4:27:21 PM with a score of 0

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