Flanagan's Adventure

I am...very very confused...
What even...?

I--I got out of there as quick as I could. I almost…almost didn't get the point. It was…annoying, painful and overall very icky.

Didn't understand at all what was happening. 2/8

I'm honestly not sure what to think of this... I guess that I liked the references to different works of literature. As a matter of fact, I think that if you expand on the 'going trough different works of literature' aspect and turn it into a full story/game, it could be great.

However, as it is now, I think your story is just a little bit too random for my taste. For example, the descriptions of the choices you give are not very helpful. Furthermore, I think it's a shame that most of the choices link back to the same pages over and over again, again without a clear/logical explanation.

As of now, I've given your story a 3/8. If you expand your story quite a bit, and maybe tone down the randomness just a little bit, I think it could be much better.

Completely illogical or utterly brilliant. I'm not sure which.

What was this supposed to be, exactly?

I want to believe that there is a real plot and story (perhaps there is, by I didn't get it) behind this set of interconnected confusing pages. Seriously, it was just puzzling. It almost didn't make any sense.

You got me confused.

Maybe I'll replay and try to understand it, so I could actually rate the game.