HBIO Project

Boris is very smart. Boris is everywhere. Boris Agnes Boris.

I played this and wasn't able to bring the health of the ecosytstem to 0 and when I tried to stop the miners it says they dug gold anyways but it doesn't subtract from the health of the ecosystem. This read like if I had to make an short essay in high school about the himalyas but my teacher wanted it as a story and this was the result. It was kind of boring which basic facts like the snow leopards pelt cost or the red panda is related to raccons and rats. things people would forget after an hour. I gave it a 4

Wow, the Harvard Bioscience Inc. Project!

I think this is a great game, I like how you combined trivia with a story. This is the first time in a long time that I like a trivia game. You brought so much life to this trivia that is not boring, and it gives you the will to keep playing even though you messed up before. And that's something I rarely see with trivia games, Usually, it's something you play once and is very forgettable but this is the polar opposite.

A few things

. You did a great job with grammar and spelling, I look out for these things because I'm bad at spelling and grammar. I did not find any grammar or spelling errors. Sure some of the sentence structure wasn't great, but it's a trivia game what can you expect?

. The questions were a bit random and really difficult, I don't see this to be a problem. It's better that the questions are too hard than too easy.

Overall I loved this story game 6/8

A quiz in the form of a story game. Very creative way to do the project, I had a lot of fun.

I especially liked the part where you explore the national park. You conveyed the whole environment like a visual map sheerly with text. The variables also helped make the game difficulty manageable.

Some information were a bit too clustered - it felt like a bunch of facts just got thrown to my face and it could make the reader lose interest. The information pages could have been more concise.

Other than that, I really liked this storygame for its creativity and organisation (maybe out of my personal interest in the Tibetan Plateau too). 7/8!

I was about to shit on it when I saw that it was a school project, but it was actually better written than I thought. I learnt a lot about the tibetan plateau and its flora and fauna.

Although some questions were a little silly or very obvious such as whether to clean up the litter of the park or do nothing, the dilemmas themselves were pretty varied and engagingly written.

I especially like the way the first question was presented (the one where the main character forgets where the tibetan plateau is situated and that the question was which countries it covered). The build up was funny, revealed a bit of personality of the protagonist and I also learnt a bit of information.

However, I would like it even more if you added a bit more personality in the main character or to see a bit more of an overbridging character arc.

Still, good job!!