How not to be eaten by a dragon

Yeah swedish meatballs. If you had more food in this it would be better.

So, to sum up... To not get eaten by a dragon, you have to not attack a dragon... Good to know I guess? It's just... Really, what was the point of this game? Was there supposed to be one? >.<

Dragons don't exist, man. If they did, we would finally have a "compelling" reason for MANPADS sales to the private citizenry.

The premise was cute. I found myself chuckling at some of the pathways. I read through four or five different endings, so there's a fair amount of interactivity. The grammar is also decent; I didn't notice any obvious errors.

The pages themselves were short, only 2-4 lines each. Any individual playthrough also only requires reading through 3-4 pages. You could improve this by increasing the length.

Well I saved my village from dragons. :)

"You buy Ikea.
You live an epically fun life, eating Swedish meatballs and bouncing on furniture. And you have an awesome dragon by your side!
You win!"
Well, giving it a 4 just for this creative idea! =D

I feel like this might have been a decent storygame if you'd put more effort into it, but I'm sure it took you about 30 minutes to make, if that. Barely any thought has been put into this story, and the writing feels more like shorthand than fleshed out description, dialogue, or anything else.
1/8

This was written well and there were lots of choices to choose from. However, it was very short and so I finished my first run through in a minute, if that. Work on the length and you'd have a good game here.

Way too short. I do like that the choices are not average. Build the length and this storygame's rating will probably go way up. Good luck! :)

No... Just horrible.

Thanks for the free point!