Late night visit

I must say that I quite enjoyed the approach that this story took. It wasn't overly descriptive but I consider that as a plus rather than a negative in the way the story was approached and how it reached it's ending. It isn't a startling plot twist at the end, but life isn't always full of those like dramas and movies like to portray. This was rather beautiful and a nice little story to pass a bit of time with :)

its a cute story good job

good

This was pretty great

I like the concept and not the execution

Brilliant

very short not that meaningful. 2.

Great premise but a better story line might give more...exitement? idk what word I'm looking for but hey. Ladies? this is your chance to test ur mans ;)

Good job. It's interesting, but it could be longer.

This was actually interesting. I am somewhat disappointed that the author now seems to be inactive, because a second work from him would probably have been pretty good.
"Late Night Visit" was not a top-notch story-game, but I liked it.

The story is just a little thing with no plot beyond, "your girlfriend visits in the middle of the night," but the author did a very good job establishing the character of the girlfriend. I was engaged throughout even though it was largely just two people watching a movie together.

The branching was disappointing. Largely because there wasn't a whole lot. Some of the choices were meaningless, and there was a lot of rejoining of branches. This was disappointing.
I was disappointed.

Additionally, I do not think it was necessary to have as many one link pages as there were, considering they were so short.

Still, while this wasn't the best as a story-game, it did a much better job at getting me interested in a character in a much shorter time than most.