Phoenician Trade Game

This story was quite informative and I found the use of items in this story quite interesting also. It really did provide another level of depth to everything and made things more interactive, that is always a positive.

Spelling and structure wise, there weren't much problems in that area as well. It seems quite a bit of effort and care was placed into making something both educational and fun for the reader :D

Bravo, this is definitely something that was rather fun and serviceable as a Edutainment story game.

For factual contact and an interactive learning experience I would rate this game very highly. For the general reader though there are no characters or plot as such so this would probably only be used as a learning tool. The spelling, grammar etc was all perfect and the item use was good but my personal preference is for something that's a bit personalised, perhaps the information about what countries use what material for what could be told to me by someone with a name and description or perhaps a plot could be thrown in (each country has a different problem i.e. Egypt is suffering from famine and I need to provide each country with the material that could help fix their problem?). Still I learned a lot so for a school project you should get top marks :D

Could be longer but is acceptable

balrright

I won so I like

I can really profit i brought nothing and got a bunch of stuff

why cant I stay home

easy bet the all ready to ezzzzzz

it wasn't nice

A nice thought and spin onto Learning how they influence the region